by spankedboy
perfect! that scene where Nazu is standing outside listening to his aunt pee was perfect. the description of the commode creaking because of her large buttocks..uufff! and when she says oh, i'm just an old woman with big buttocks..ahhh! beautiful story, well written, well paced. waiting eagerly for next chapter. masturbated twice to this story already! thanks!
awesome story.. Thank you. You are gradually expanding the story thats the good thing about the story. Just a request upload new chapters more frequently like this one. Too good.
That apology wasn’t required at all, one side you are apologizing and the other she is touching you... seriously destroyed the mood and what the fuck his him crying like a baby oh come on...
Spankedboy Thank you for the quick response. Just write what you think. I believe you dnt need anyones suggestion to write. Waiting to see more actions between Mamani and Nazu. Waiting for the next chapters
@Anon, thanks. If everyone was like Nazu we wouldn't need stories like this! :-D
@Nirana, I love readers like you. I really do. Not only do you read, not only do you leave a comment, you leave the best type of comments. You tell me exactly what you liked, and you pay attention to those little details I sprinkle in the story - much appreciated!
And I love it when readers tell me they masturbated to my stories. That's what they are for!
@Anon, thanks for the comment. I will talk about the frequency in a bit.
@Anon, you think the apology wasn't good? I think it made the aunt less wary and let's face it - she was tempted as well but she is fighting her inner conservativeness.
@Gogai, you are welcome.
Now as for the frequence, I am afraid this series will pause for sometime now. This is the only way I can write Chapter 6,7,8 and post it all together. It has to be like that. I need to take my time, sorry about that.
Meanwhile, there will be a Vidya chapter out in October!
thanks everyone for your comments. Especially when you guys describe the scene that you love most and pay attention to those little details I have sprinkled, it just makes my day.
As for the comment that said the apology spoiled it, I disagree, but thanks for your comments.
This series is likely to be paused at this stage for some time as I write Chap 6,7,8 so I can publish them in quick succession. So for sometime, there will not be any new chapters posted in this series. Meanwhile, a new Vidya is planned next month.
I would love my readers to also join this Facebook group dedicated to my stories.
https://www.facebook.com/groups/264037251118260/
I've bookmarked the series for long and at least check for the update twice in a day !
Would love to see nazu proceeding with his sexual acts with other mamani's too without losing his act of being naive and innocent.
A very obvious sex depiction would ruin the entire plot of these series !!
And lastly thank you @spankedboy for giving us the best time jerking
fantastic story I liked the way you tell the story ,I wish you continue the slow biuld up of the story and don't rush into full sex with Shaheen aunty , make her to show him her panty or seeing her boob , but she refuse at least in the beginning doing full sex because of her strict and religious behavior, ,you can put some scene of him making a small hole in the bathroom to see her taking bath or my be another scene of him going in rush to the downstairs indian_style toilet and accidentally seeing his Shaheen or tyba aunty squatting over the toilet and pissing
Nice story spankedboy. Just go with your pace don't change anything.
The link you sent is not working. Please give the name of group you have on facebook
Thank you for the comments. I will continue the story at the pace - but it will take some time before I come back with chaps 6.7,8.
The facebook group is called "Indian Erotica by Tarek Zia (Spankedboy)"
And link is https://www.facebook.com/groups/264037251118260/
Please try to write your story early as possible
Awesome story. Such a tease. Eagerly waiting for the rest.
When is the next chapter coming. Really waiting to read it. Please don't stop writing, I really like your stories.
Please complete the full story and post one by one daily ... couldn't wait fr it
this will take some time. As I said, chap 6-8 will be posted together.
For now, enjoy the other stories.
It will most likely be January or Feb until this series gets updates. Please join my facebook group "Indian Erotica by Tarek Zia" for other info and new series.
Waiting for your latest update from long time... please give latest update
Too much Slow.Request you to include other family members with servants also.Describe it in a kinky way by including fetishism like pissing on each other, drinking whisky with piss,making tea with piss & breastmilk etc.
As I said somewhere up in the comments - it will be most likely Jan or Feb 2019 before I start again on this series, so please stop messaging me about when I return to this series!
It's been an amazing read so far. Pacing has been almost perfect. Alsoi like how although it's incestuous yet there is a base of love and mutual respect. Just request not to break this by moving into bizarre as some request. Would love it if there is neither the maid nor any other male. Just the aunt and nephew journey
fantastic this is the best story I've ever read in this forum , this your place not other types ( bondage... etc)
You r d best writer of mine till date... please publish the latest parts. Please... eagerly waiting fr the next parts... u r awesome man.
One of the best stories from India. This is the kind of story that should go on and on into multiple chapters. Well done, Spankedboy !
Best story ever i have read...chat me on. s h a n k g o r e 1 2 3 @ g m a i l . C o m
Bro the story is so lit.... When is the next chapter coming??.. can't wait more
it's January already when are the next chapters coming? this is by far the best work you've done so I hope you understand how much we're waiting fr this.
Bro this is just not justified, you can either let your fans know the date of release of ch 6 7 8 or you can tell us that you are not writing anymore. I have fucked aunt Shaheen so many times in my dreams. You need to be fair to poor souls like us and release the chapters soon.
It's January already, upload more parts as soon as possible....
Oh for Christ sake pls upload the chapter 6. I'm/We are starving. It's already been months. I've read the entire story more the five time it never ceases to arouse me. But I want more. The highlight of this series is the slow but steady bulid up of sexual tension, which are rare to find. I'm sure you've got your own commitments, but pls think of us poor souls eagerly waiting to know what happened later on with Shaheen, Taiba, Nadia & Pushpita. Yet of course we can dream & imagine our own versions, but nothing provides the kink of reading your well scripted story. Believe it or not I kept checking your submission daily this month & was left disappointed not to find the update. But I can only assure myself that if it's taking long then it must be really arousing or should I say hit the nail on the head. Anyways I'm looking forward for the update. Wish you luck & keep up the good work so that the rest of the aroused souls can pleasure themselves.
It's Feb now
Please post it
Or at least let us know when you're gonna post it
So that we don't look up for the new chapter everyday
I know you dont get paid to write the stories its understandable for you not to continue the story but if you wont continue just let us know about that, cuz this would help us not expect new chapters! So far very well writen i love both of your aunt and servent series and hope you would continue to amaze and arouse us by these stories!
Hi everyone.
It's amazing to see the interest in this series. While it's meant to be a long series, at the moment I don't know when I will publish the next chapters. Certainly not soon. Not even sure if I will continue . I write erotica as a hobby, so I do it when I want to. Thanks.
your aunt shaheen is so hot she remind me of my older cousin, she treated me as brother.
Guess you're not going to follow up with a conclusion. But it was great while it lasted, measured up - mostly, to Literotica standards. Was invested b'coz I know large Muslim families quite well, from an outsider's perspective. You came very close.
Wish you well.
Its february, when tf u gonna post? The next chapter, i know u busy and all but we have all waited, so come on pleasee
Fantastic story u could make a successful erotic movie if u could find a good director
Please add some hairy fitish like shaheen has some hair on her thighs, and on her arm pits
The wait is well worth it. But, I would rather die than to wait for this again. I know you are busy, but please, don't make us wait too long.
Good job!
Great stories. So naturally arousing. Would love to read more!
waiting for to expose Shaheen's nude buttocks to her nephew and get licked