All Comments on 'Summer of the Slow Burn'

Really fuckin hot 🔥

@pkp033 - Thanks for the compliment. Glad you enjoyed it!

An unlikely story!!!!

Very nicely played - five stars.

This is some really fucking Hot writing and the only thing is that it could be a little longer. It deserves more than five stars, because it's an incredibly good story. Maybe a sequel? Rj

Extremely hot story. Very well done, 5 stars. Got a sequel?

1. Well written

2. Every man's dream

3 Outstanding concept for the male ego.

4. Personally could not have handled the limitation.

5. Like the switch of the man being totally objectified.

Thank you Paul - I liked the tension building and the twist of two women, not just one, teasing him spellbound by his body and penis. It was very well written.

I wondered whether the hero’s feelings might have have had greater impact on the reader if you’d written in the first person. As a woman I’d also liked to have let the women each take their pleasure of him by much more than sucking his cock. But that’s just me! It’s a lovely story!

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