All Comments on 'Summer Son'

Please continue this. I just hope she grows some pubes and they get into watersports.

The husband/father came home from work, had two G & T's, went to sleep while his wife and son played their games and went to bed not realising that he hadn't had any dinner!

Great start with lots of potential for all kinds of fun games. Can't wait to see where you take us.

I do want more of this

What a wonderful story. All the teasing was a great turn on. Hope there is another chapter!!

So hot. Made me so horny just reading this.

Is Jay going to keep his girlfriend on the side, maybe just to make his Mom jealous? Who is defining the relationship and where they fuck? If they are sexing each other on a daily basis it’s only a matter of time before they start making videos, will Jay then start posting online? He’s an exhibitionist and nudist with a sexually aggressive Mom and an oblivious Dad. Lots of potential here.

Amazing story,

Love the way Marcie and Jay tease each other, it is a perfect buildup for the two becoming lovers.

My thoughts are that jay should move back home, attend college there. And dump his girlfriend.

And Marcie and Jay should continue loving each other on a daily basis. To the point that Jay takes Marcie as his.

Hope this story will continue. With Marcie and Jay falling in love with each other.

5 Starts

I got so into this story I didn’t realise that I started teasing my hard nipples feet away from a relative. That was one nice build up.

Mom and son masturbating while thinking of each other, the teasing, dumb dumb Dad oblivious, and the final suck and fuck in the minivan--5 stars squared!

Good on ya son. Oh you good boy. You fuck ya mother. Wish l could fuck mine. Masturbated as l read. Loved it.

Loved it , James_Steele! 5 stars wish I could give it ten!

I loved it. Hopefully there will be a followup chapter detailing their further adventures! Five stars and a favorite point!

Bravo. Got me there and over.

Well done.

In need of a sequel!!

It desperately needs a few more chapters.

mother in her late 60s riding my hard cock while reading the story

sure hope there is more chapters

I really enjoyed this story but its to short. I'd like to hear how their affair cumms along. I would also like to hear how she becomes Pregnant with her sons baby.

Please, sir, we need more ... much more!

Damn hot

Looks like it's going to be a LONG HOT SUMMER, But will dad find out? . And then what will happen?. Stay tuned for part 2 .PLEASE. Thanks for the read

Now THAT was sooo hot!!!

The writing is exceptionally good, the reason for the rating. Too bad the narrative is so unoriginal. The same elements, over and over again: well endowed characters, an absent father figure, uncontrollable lust, a mother under 40, never get caught...It gets redundant and tiresome.

With this talent, the author can definitely create something interesting. Keep writing!

I should've let mom catch me a few times back in the day.

Yes, the is one hot story. Hope to read more chapters in the future.

That is the hottest fucking mommy son story I have ever read. 10 stars at least!! You need to do another chapter. Damn, that was hot. I think I will go do some nasty shit to my Mommy right now.....

Please continue this story. There much more to be added. Thank you

I can only agree - Please continue this story. There are much more to be added in the story. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Hope you can make another chapter for this one.

I really enjoyed the story. I wish your stories were longer. Keep up the good work!

Absolutely loved the story! Definitely need more!!! Very aroused

Awesome! But... needs a continustion! Please.

Excellent story. Thank you for sharing.

Finest kind

Great possibilities for follow up; In the open in the backyard planting, or say with some of Marcie's friends in a hot tub (re. Denise)

Hot stuff...FIVE STARS!

Yup, definitely a 5🌟...I hope you keep this story alive with their sexcapades in different locations i.e. hiking trails, parks, on a boat, etc..maybe add a deeper forming love that Jay hasn't picked up on yet as his mom is trying to show through a wonderful buildup that finally clicks in him later on..Enjoyed your writing..

Oh so GOOD!!

One of the hottest stories on here in my opinion

Best motherfuking story of heard for a while

It takes me back 2 when I was 16 years old and my mother caught me playing with my dick one Saturday afternoon she set down on the bed and explain a few things to me after she finished talking and chastised me she laid down beside me and suck me off that was the start of our relationship which lasted until she died aged 77 years

To be continued, please

We need more of this story .

(4/21/2022) Dang..., another excellent Hot mommy short story. How many of these do you have? Cock alert, there's a new rooster loose in the hen house.

Now this should had another chapter

Excellent.

Awesome story gave it a 5 but you should have continued with more thought it was cut off midstream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice storyloved how they had sex in her mini van and the blow job on the coach with his dad sleeping but you quit to early you need write more of this story. Gave it 5 stars.

I still think you should go head and write another chapter exploring the love between the mom and son throughout the summer

Bravo? Well done. Interesting story of a mom and son's intimate relationship as it progressed. Your presentation was well-paced and laced with love, compassion and respect. Your ending left the door open for a number of possible scenarios that could continue for as long as you are prepared to present them. You have a willing Literotica following, of which I am one, that would welcome additional offerings.

It's always amusing and kind of sad how little the husbands in these stories pay attention to their gorgeous, sexually unsatisfied wives. Yeah I know, they're written that way for the purposes of the story, but you know it happens in real life, too, all too often. Sure, in a lot of cases, they're fucking their young, bimbo secretary or whatever, but even in other cases, you have to wonder just how stupid they are to ignore the magnificence they have in front of them. If I ever get a woman like that you can bet your nuts I'll never let a day go by where I don't show her how much I appreciate her.

Pretty hot story. Admittedly not a fan that he cheated on his girlfriend, or that the mom did the same with her husband. Yeah, it seems the husband wasn't really into her any more so there is at least a little justification there, but what about his girlfriend? It seems they were into each other, though that could just be for the kinky sex. Sure, there wasn't really any mention of strong feelings and, if I'm being perfectly honest, there's a fair chance she's also cheating on him with such a long break and given her proclivity for adventurous sex. I'm not saying she would be trying to hurt him or anything; she simply has needs and he's not able to meet them for a long time, given the situation. They should have just broken up beforehand but that's just a minor nitpick.

It would have been nice to see where this story leads but sadly this author's style is more about just a relatively short story with a brief ending and no real expansion into what happens beyond the physical consummation of the relationship. I don't think I've ever seen as much as an epilogue in his stories so far and I'm nearly finished reading them all. I think that's a crying shame. One fully-fledged story with a great ending and multiple chapters is better than 10 shorter stories, in my opinion.

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