All Comments on 'Summer Storm'

Even if not 100% accurate scientifically, the flashing lightening and crashing thunder is a helluva backdrop for escalating passion. I could almost — but thankfully not quite — visualize his growing erection becoming a metaphorical lightening rod, sizzling them both for their sin of passion before formally exchanging first names. Good story!

A joyous romp and quick read. Reminds me of Lou Christie's song, Rhapsody In The Rain.

A bit of sexy red chest hair for Sean's sexy body would be a great treat for Cassie! Please write more! This is a great story!

That was hot.

And wet.

And actually funny.

approval Sir Publius !!

Marvelously well written story!

Great story, but I kept waiting for an alligator to appear.

Liked it but there was too much focus on her bra and boobs at the start.

Amusing and erotic, also well written with very few errors (stripping not striping). Thanks.

Great story - never been that close to a lightning strike myself and don't want to be - even with sex thrown in. Well written with a likeable character in Cassie.

Hah, that was really fun reading and a hot story too! Written so vividly that I almost felt that rain over my skin. Thank you, five stars!

I’m a professional tropical meteorologist, and I endorse this story - except for them sheltering under a steel structure with all that lightning, which had me a little too much on edge! For the sequel, perhaps you could trap them in a blizzard? Much safer. 5 stars.

A great example of how entertaining erotica can be. I hope to read more of Cassie's adventures.

I know this was a one off. But this story could use an encore.

I WISH I WERE THERE IN THE RAIN, IN MY EYES, KNEES HURTING, EVERYTHING. YOU ARE INCREDIBLY GOOD AT THE FLIRTATION-LIKE DIALOG AND THE SENSUAL HEAT OF THE PASSIONATE EVENTS - ALL KINDS. WOW! WHAT A SKILL. WE ALL SHOULD BE CELEBRATING YOU. 10 OUT OF 5 - YOU DESERVE MILLIONS FOR THIS WORK. I HOPE YOU CAN TELL THAT I LIKE THIS!!!

Sorry but I felt this one could use more beginning, middle and end so I just comment and not rate.

Wowza.

I particularly like:

“The long-lived bolt, ionizing multiple jagged tunnels through the air, winked out. It left in its wake a huge expanse in the atmosphere where the air had essentially been displaced or even destroyed. That space was now filled with vacuum, and the surrounding air slammed into it, making a triple blast of literally breath-taking thunder which struck them both with physical force.”

Apart from the fact that air, like other matter, cannot be destroyed but only transformed, this was a lucid accounting of a thunderclap. Too many stories here don’t even get the anatomical and physiological details right.