All Comments on 'Summer Storms'

.....but then turned nasty; it didn't need to, there WAS a good story to be had but you overdid it.

Loved it , felt it,

You could have given us a story that 90% of the readers would have enjoyed. Instead, you chose to post a pathetic piece of garbage that MAYBE 5% of the readers could stomach.

At least you had the courtesy to warn us, in your "author's note", that you were writing for the very few folks who can actually get off on piss, pain, and rape (non-consent is rape, even if the girl started out aching for her daddy. The minute she says 'Stop' or 'No', it becomes rape) so I didn't have to bother reading any of it. I could just skip to the last page, scroll down, and click the 'one star' rating that any material of this sort truly deserves, as far as I'm concerned!

I'm not going to complain about the subject content as you did mention it all in the author's note at the beginning. The punishment part just got too brutal for my taste. 3 stars.

@started off good....

Sorry it wasn't to your taste, but thanks for trying it out.

@Aussie Girl

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it

@ Piece of S#!& !!

Wait, you rated and commented based on the foreward? Wow, okay. Isn't that a bit like judging a book by the cover? But that said, i'd rather please 5% of readers than 95% of readers. Those 5% are cool poeple, and this one was for them, but thanks for taking the time to comment.

@ Sex4lf57

She forgot to ask for a safeword ;p lol j/k. What you said is valid criticism, and i respect it. My stories aren't for everyone. thank you for trying it.

So hard all the way through this and had.to cum myself

you are a sad specimen of humanity your daughter wanted to give you her prize possession ,instead of trying to make it beautiful for her you turned it into torture

All I can say is you are one sadistic motherfucker.

Loved the story! 5 stars from me. The ending was my favorite part. Amazing really!

Fuck this is amazing. Long as hell, but amazing. I probably came atleast 4 times. You put a warning st the start so I knew what I was in for, I guess some of the people just ignored it. 5 stars ^~^ <3

Five stars as always :) I love how he calls her babygirl, its so sexy in a way hehe. Could u make another daddy/daughter story where the daughter already has a boyfriend & the daddy is jealous? and MORE SEXY DADDIES PLEASE!!!

By the ways, how did you get into ur Daddy/Daughter kink? Just curious :)))

@mrsjiyongchy

Thanks for the feedback! Hm, a daughter with boyfriend and a jealous daddy? No promises, but I'll see what i can do. How did i get into Daddy/Daughter? I think i was just born this way!

@DaddysLittleDevil

Thanks! Yes, it was long, but I'm glad you had time to enjoy it at least 4 times!

@EvaDeCruz

Well, thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending. I do it all for fans like you >;)

@Sadism

Um... thanks!! I think. Maybe i am too far gone, but i didn't even think this was that sadistic!

@so sad

You do know she wasn't really my daughter, right? It wasn't based on a true story or anything. But it was beautiful. Daddy can be naughty, yes, but daddy can be nice too >=D

@enjoyed this

Hey, glad you enjoyed it! thanks.

I think the father knew what would happen if he let himself give in to his needs. He was trying to protect his daughter from his need to dominate her.

I had heeded your warning at the beginning

I learned I am not your target audience.

My fault, not yours.

found it was 12 pages after I read the first page, Too fucking long.

VanillaExtract, you really are one sick fucker, and that's the exact reason why I keep coming back to read your stories. ;-) 12 pages was a bit long, but I understand how a story can get out of hand when you're trying to incomporate so many different ideas. As always, this is great story, and I can't wait to see what comes out of your dirty mind next.

@ freakersball1988

Thanks! I will take that as a compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Don't give me too much credit though. It was the fans who asked for this one. Maybe i just added too much VanillaExtract into the blender.

@Averygoodlay

Sorry for wasting your time, but thanks for the comment. I should have included a tl;dr for people who don't enjoy reading stores on a website dedicated to reading stories. Next time i will put less story in my story so you don't have to read so much story. Shit, maybe i'll just write my next story here in the comments.

tl;dr daughter teases daddy, daddy resists, daddy gets angry, daddy punishes, daughter cries, daddy fucks her. The end =D

@rightbank

Well, thank you for trying the story and taking the time to comment. I am sorry it was not for you. No harm, no foul. I hope you took something positive away from the experience.

@The father knew the beast within

Oh yes, you are absolutly right. He was trying to protect his daughter, and do the right thing, punishing her to set her straight, but... the road to hell is paved with good intentions.

I'm not a fan of BDSM, and this story got pretty violent for me. However, it was so well written I could not stop reading. The story structure was great, the characters thoughts/dialogue were believable, and the overall buildup kept me going. Five stars. Nicely done.

I'm in love with story! One of my all-time favorites ever!

A bit violent for my tastes, but I sill enjoyed it. You should have some female-on-male analingus in your next story.

@SejsicA

Well, thank you for saying the story was well-written. Truly, "well-written" is the highest compliment anyone can pay me. I appreciate it.

@PennysDirtyMind

Thank you! I'm glad you can call this story one of your favorites! It's certainly not for everyone.

@Hot Stuff.

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Oh, wow, analingus? Hmm... I'll put it into the blender for next time, but no promises on that one.

First of all, I was super happy about that update with Brandy. One of my favourite stories of yours and I was happy to revisit if only for a brief time. When I realised this story was about the asshole of an Uncle I was wary and after making it through, I was definitely right to be. After reading your warning I thought it would be like Lexi's Diary so I was prepping myself but this went nekk level and I couldn't help but be disappointed in how much of an asshole Henry was, especially since he came across as the sexiest daddy you've ever written. Not even that "romantic ending" or your inclusion of my fav kink impreg could redeem him for me (which is really saying something cause I five star the shit out of those). I do realise that you were catering to the wants of the requesters so you could only do so much so I won't blame you. I've been a long time fan and I'll continue to read and support you. I just ask that maybe for the next one, there is a little bit more of some tender sex? Pretty please with a daughter on top? :D

But I would have had him grovel more. And beg for forgiveness. He really messed her up. It was his way of dealing with his own desire towards her that was totally messed up. But I did read the intro and I get it. I'd love for there to be more of this couple. She deserved more for actually acting her desires out. She deserves more tendeness. and him to beg and grovel again and again.

This was so well written my mind is completely blown. Great job. Maybe a follow up?

This is my first comment on a literotica story. Usually i dont write any. But this story is so nice and well written, i had to leave a comment. I love it. Write more.

This is one of the best written smut pieces EVER. You did cater to so many different fetishes and kinks, and I loved every single one--except the soap in the mouth, but it wouldn't have been a true punishment without it would it? So while I spent a good percentage of this story with my mouth open and a look of repulsion or concern, I found it to be completely hot, and in the end, moving. I love how he didn't flake on punishments. He did what he said he would do, which is what we all want from our men. This was thoroughly addicting. And now that it's three hours past bedtime, off I go!

@ First of all...

I'm glad you appreciated the Brandy throwback. Don't hate Henry too much though. Was he really an asshole in Brandy's Bedroom? He was trying to protect his neice from a man who  might rape her. Seems like a nice guy to me... I foreshadowed Henry in Brandy and also Acquit. He's a frustrated police officer who does not approve of incest, so when his own daughter came to him, of course he reacted the way he did in this story. That's what this is, a story about a flawed man who has to deal with his feelings for his daughter that contradict his beliefs. All that said, thank you for reading and commenting. I will try to make a more tender story next time.

@I like how it was written

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked the writing. You might be right. He should have had to beg her forgiveness, but at the length the story was, and the exciting conclusion i wanted, i did not want to derail the ending with too much dialog. Also, i don't think Summer needed it. She was so in love that just being wanted was apology enough... for her anyway. She was a submissive girl.

@Holy crap

Thanks! I'm glad the story blew you away! But i doubt there will be a follow up. I need, like, divine-intervention-level motivation to write sequels, and there's nowhere to take this one. But at least it had a happy ending!

@amazing story

Thanks! I'm glad you decided to leave a comment. I'll try to write more, but for me, it's quality over quantity, so it may be a while...

@joodle

haha, thanks. I'm glad you found the story well written and captivating and enjoyed all the different kinks... except the soap. I don't think anyone would enjoy that! To all the daddies out there, don't try this at home ;p

I've never replied to a Literotica story, but this one was amazing. Thank you for writing this.

It's cool being inside of your head whenever I read something that you write. You always draw me in so that I become completely submerged in your plot, and that's not easy to do well. You're really talented, and I love all of the stories that you create.I even got a little misty eyed when she finally snapped, and told him she hated him.

It doesn't matter if this story contains all of your personal kinks. What matters is that it was interesting, and captivating, and well told. For everyone barking complaints at this dude... Remember, he's doing this for free for your personal entertainment. Show a little respect. If you can't manage that... take your ass to Barnes and Nobles and get off the site.

Keep up the good work, Vanilla

A deep and sincere thank you. I've watched your writing and style evolve over time and I can honestly say you are a true talent. Each peice is lovingly crafted and I can tell you put a lot of yourself into them.

The daddy/ daughter/ virgin/ semi to super rapey story pool is a pretty small one. Most the time, I have to take what I can get. I've never felt that way about any of your stories. Even the parts I'm less into are workable. They're well writen so I can power through to a part that makes me cum until I'm shaking.

I masterbate to your stories every day. Daddy It Doesn't Fit makes me cum in under a minute. As all my past lovers can assure you, that is not as easy task.

Thanks so much V! Your fan base may be smaller than the rest but we appriciate you so much more!

@Great Story!

Thank you! I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it and you were encouraged you to leave your first comment. Feedback keeps me going.

@NeverDisappointing

Thank you, friend. I'm glad I could pull you into the story. And i agree with you. For me, the story and expereince of the characters comes first. The actual sex is just a forgone conclusion. To write sex without a story would be boring. But if you can get the story right, it enhances the erotica.

@From One Sick Fuck to Another

Haha, thanks for your comment, my fellow sick fuck. Yes, i think you're right. Those who really enjoy these stories are part of a niche group who have a very unique kink. But i figure the rest of the Lit crowd has plenty of writers to give them what they want. I'd much rather have a few positive comments from fans like you than have 10,000 readers giving me 5 stars without a word. Take care.

...I almost threw up!

Oh, and btw, in writing 'lied' instead of 'lay', in the following line, "I climbed in the back and lied across the seats," you come across as semi-literate.

I have read all your stories and I love them. I have even got my husband turned on to your stories. I can honestly say I cum harder when I read them. I have always been into daddy/daughter sex. My husband and I role play all the time. I'm his little girl and he is my daddy and the sex so so much better. We have even acted out some off your stories. I love them all.

@Once The Violence Kicked In...

This comment almost made me throw up. Bleh! Just kidding! haha. Thank you for commenting. I'm not sure if you were being sarcastic with your "semi-literate" quip, but, yes, thank you for pointing out my misuse of the word "lied." The sentence should have been "I lay across the seats." However, as this is not an academic paper, and it was very long, and I was very tired of editing it, mistakes can happen. If a few mistakes on an website dedicated to amature erotica is how you gauge literacy in the world, you need to check your privilege. I normally find grammar Nazi's detestable, as they are clearly so insecure they can only uplift themselves by finding fault in others, but for you, I'll make an exception. You'd make Hitler proud.

@MistressC69

Why thank you! I am glad my stories could in some small way enhance your experience with your other half. Acting them out, hmm? You seem to be having more fun with these stories than i am! ;)

You know, I wasn't much into dad/daughter stories before reading yours. I found your stories after reading My Runaway Sister. I loved it, but I was kinda disappointed at first when I found out all your other stories were father/daughter ones. But since I'd liked your writing so much, I decided to give the others a chance. And really I don't regret it! You really got me hooked into daddy/daughter stuff, and this new one managed to become my second favorite of your stories, right after the "daddy it doesn't..." trilogy. Thank you for this!

Could not stop reading. The angst of the daughter was so real that I could almost feel her emotional pain. The build up was terrific and well worth the wait and the struggle of the father was so believable compared to the other stories I have read with dads giving in to their daughters in less than 5 sentences( although nothing wrong with that either ;)

Hope to read more again soon!

You are one of my favorite authors here, I love the attitude of the sex scenes (A LOT!!), I love your sense of humor and the overall feelin of your writing.

This one I enjoyed a great deal, my emotions were like a roller coaster, but I have to say towards the end I felt a bit disappointed. The reason is the reunion of summer with her father. I felt like the man you described, who is an officer that has a great sense of duty etc, would not proclaim in front of all those passengers, his lust and love for his daughter. I felt it was out of character. Maybe if he, somehow, got her of the bus first it would feel better. Honestly at first I was sure summer was dreaming this whole scene.

thank you for the story, am really excited to reading your next!!

@I loved it and evey single other of your stories!

Hey, all right! I converted another one over to daddy/daughter! For me, it's the most fun incest category, because of the natural dominant/submissive relationship between a father and a daughter. Ah, it's all just for fun. Glad you liked it :)

@Newbie13

Thanks, n00b! I'm glad you liked it. It was long, but I needed that time to really build the angst, like you said. The stakes were real for these two, and it took a while for Daddy to come around, and for daughter to figure out just what she was willing to endure for him. To me, that's kinda romantic =D

@LustDomina

Thanks! I'm happy to be called one of your favorites. So, let's talk about the ending, because I would hate to have you walk out of the theater disappointed. You are right. Henry was a hard man. He was in control of Summer... right up until she left him that note and walked out of his life. We did not see this story from his POV, but if we had, we would have seen him wrestling with his emotions, breaking down and realizing he had pushed his daughter away, that he had lost the only good thing in his life with his selfishness. However, what we did see was a man who was so lost, he chased after his daughter in the dead of night. Imagine how that drive went, him searching for her, interrogating the kid at the bus terminal, sirens blaring as he sped through the treacherous rain. By the time he found Summer, whatever was left of angry Henry was gone. There was only a man who loved his daughter. He didn't care about who saw him or what they thought. He just needed her back in his arms... So it felt believable to me. Also, I totally stole that ending from "An Officer and a Gentleman," and it worked out fine for Richard Gere even though he was a total dick :p

Thanks for taking the time to answer so thoroughly!! Now I love you even more!!

Just for conversational reasons let me give my perspective after your description.

He is lost, paniked, driving like crazy to get to her, he is also determined, to make things right, to get her back! He stops the bus, frantically gets on to see if she is there, finds her and without saying a word grabs her and gets her off the bus. Then maybe gives her an earth shattering kiss while the passenger's try to figure out what the hell is going on! Then he tells her she's his forever, maybe gets her pregnant etc. Ok that's another story, or hopefully the next chapter!!

Don't get me wrong I love love love your style!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!

Not really into the choking but like the daddy/daughter incest especially the spanking.My first partner was 26 years older than me and he was wonderful. Never interested in doing my real daddy but really ,liked seeing his penis. If I was showering, which had a glass door, and he or my brother came into the bathroom to use the toilet. Loved looking at their large penises.

Overall a great read. Vanilla, I really appreciate how much you deviate from the typical plot formulae of most stories. The unpredictable story structure kept me reading through the parts that emphasize your typical theme of "man is ashamed of his incestuous feelings, man does terrible shit to reject those feelings and later justify them with rationalizing that it's to help daughter/sister."

I appreciate that your stories are far from vanilla, both in fetishes presented, as well as story/plot. But I'm always gonna like what I like, and I tend to prefer the vanilla side of kinky, like a few of your stories. I'm always gonna cheer on the dad who just slaps his babygirl around while pounding her pussy like a normal person. Or, just fucks his daughter's throat like a regular Joe. Back in my day, fathers made their daughters into typical household sluts as soon as they discovered their girls looked at them sexually. There was none of this internal struggle stuff.

So, yeah. Even if all of your writing isn't always for me, it's some of the best on Literotica. 10/10 would bust a nut again

Just want to say, you are probably my favorite author on this site for a reason. I swore to remain just another anon, but I made an account just to save you to my favorites! *shakes fist angrily*

Anyway, I have not read a single thing by you (well, okay, maybe with the exception of the Other Stuff) that I have not enjoyed. Well done, sir. I'm not really much into the pain stuff, just not my thing, but I still most definitely enjoyed this. Thoroughly. Multiple times. It's like you found some of the dirtiest corners of my own mind and lured me in with them.

Consider me hooked.

Also, nice job with the female POV. Summer did not irritate me, which is saying something for me. So, yeah. Great writing, great build-up, great dialogue, etc. etc. *continues singing praises*

Keep doing what you're doing!

Wow, what a piece of absolute garbage. How any reasonably normal parent, could possibly inflict so much hurt,and humiliation, on their child, totally escapes me. The parent is obviously sick, and the daughter is a wreck. The writer has an amazing sense of how families love and respect each other. OUCH.

@LustDomina

Hmm, yes, this would have been a good ending too, or even if he arrested her right on the bus without saying anything. That would have been exciting, ah, next time ;p Thanks again for taking the time to comment.

@Loved the story

Thanks, glad you liked it. Good luck with all your future penises.

@Vancest

Haha, well, i think this type of story works best with conflict. If there is no conflict, no inner struggle, it's less fun for me to write. So that is why i tend to write the conflict of the male. I think it's also the most realistic way a father would look at his daughter, with hesitance. Maybe he wouldn't punish her the same way as this story, but that's just my style. Thanks for commenting

@VeeForVirture

hey, thanks! I'm happy i'm one of your favorite authors here, and my writing encouraged you to make an account. By all means, tell your other favorite writers you enjoy their work. It's very encouraging. And thank you for saying the female POV turned out so well! I tend to struggle writing females, so if Summer did not annoy you and was believable, then i will take that compliment graciously.

@How to love your daughter.??????

Thank you for commenting. My style is not for everyone, but I'm glad you tried it. It's just for fun though, so try not to let it upset you, and please don't assume the writer is fucked up just becuase the story is fucked up. Okay, maybe the writer is a little fucked up ;p

First of all father / daughter sex is not my main kink but Vanilla Extract 's way with a word cannot be denied. The immediacy in the back and forth exchanges of the two main characters gets progressively more raw and real with V.E . building the tension like a rogue tsunami. Then that wave hits land , crests and throws everything in its path like lethal game of 52 pickup. Whoaaaaaa.

Full marks *****

I read the caption and paused, but had to read it anyways because you wrote it. While dialogue was great as always, the pleasure/pain ratio was kind of rough. A dual 1st person POV would have made the man a little easier. The reader could have understood the struggle he was going through and a reach around wouldn't have hurt after all of his punishment. :) The internal battle is always the best in this genre. Copious orgasms seems to ease the readers mind of the abuse, as well as a good loss of control on the man's part.

That being said, hot as always. You ever want a proofreader/editor, shoot me an email. Not that I think you need it, but because I would love to read your stories faster. The grammar Nazis seem to forget that this is a free site and any work done is from hobby and passion. So thanks for taking the time to write it. Your stories are ones that can be read over and over again. You went a little on the dark side with this one, but still what a sexy ass mind.

@LordSlammdawgg

Thanks for making it all the way through this story. Your comments are always appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed the way this story built the tension. I appreciate the 5 stars!

@kaiyandom

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad the foreword did not scare you off, but in the interest of disclosure to the sensetive readers, I felt i had to include a thorough warning. The pleasure/pain ratio was rougher than i normally go, but i think it worked for this story because the daddy was so fucked up. Hm, a dual POV might have been interesting to write, but i fear i would have gotten too wrapped up in the male side, and as i've written the male side so many times before, it was time for the female side. Still, i'm glad you found it hot. I will keep your offer of proofreading in mind. Thanks for reading!

I've been into the daddy/daughter kink for a while and I've just recently started reading about bdsm, and ur writing was soo good (I didn't even masturbate to this I just wanted to read it haha) so I went through all 12 pages but it got a little too forcey and rapey for me :( I'm glad they're together and whatever but I wish he wasn't so rough with her or at least was more apologetic about it

I was reading this and I got so horny while reading this. The emotional roller-coster was great and enjoyable.

i read 12 pages of great writing and then the last few paragraghs ruined it for me i guess i don't understand why anyone would want to make a baby with their daughter fucking them is one thing but then you want to curse a child and yes it is a curse due to many mental and psychical problems the CHILD COULD HAVE it is selfish yes it may be some degenerate thing sorry i would have given it a five star but then then the ending dropped it down to no star and reminder that your stories are not worth reading to the end

Hell, a daddy getting his girl pregnant doesn't bother me (besides, it's a fantasy story, right?), in this day and age an average couple is just as likely to have a kid with genetic or health problems as some first generation incest couple. What bothered me and made me lose interest was when dad started turning into super douchebag, ramming his soapy cock down her throat, slapping her around, and who knows what else. I totally lost interest in the story at that point.

For the most part I loved the story up to that point...mostly. I guess some people get off on that kind of stuff..different strokes (pardon the pun;), I'm just not one of them. Can't imagine loving my child but doing something like that to her no matter how angry I was.

Oh well, thanks for writing and sharing anyway!

INCEST, I BELIEVE MORE PEOPLE READ IT THAN ADMIT IT. THE ONLY FANTASY IN YOU STOREY IS HOW IT HAPPENS. I FOR ONE REALLY LOVED YOUR STORY. YOU WRITE SO WELL AND KEPT IT SO INTERESTING I COULDN'T STOP READING. WHAT AN IMAGINATION. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

I have been into the Father Daughter Incest Fantasy for over 10 years.

I do give No Star rating to this Story because all of the Violence in it.

This year is i have typed 2 so very long Different Stories about the Father Daughter Incest Fantasy. Also because my Stories is just a Fantasy is I do put Super Hero Abilities in the Father and plus is I do get him to have Babies and Children together with his Daughter. Any Father Daughter Incest Story that does have No Violence in it is I do give a 5 Star Rating to those Stories. And I do have a Daughter of my very own and there is No Way on Earth and also in Hell that I would Hurt her in any Way, Shape and Form if she does Falls Deeply In-Love with Me. I do really have a Golden Heart what just can Never ever at all allow Me to be Horrible and Terrible to any of my Children. I do Unconditionally Love all of my Children with all of my Heart and I will Always be Good towards because it is just Not Worth it at all to be Bad and Evil towards them. I did used to Play the PC Game of The Sims 2 and in that Game is I can get to see my Father Daughter Incest Fantasies as a Animated Reality. The True and Real Reward for a Incest Story and Fantasy is when 2 Family Members do have a Romantic and Sexual Relationship together with No Violence at between them.

I did really got Totally Turned Off by the Incest Story of Summer Storms because of the Bad and Evil Father in it. Just only if the Father in this Story was a so very Good Father is then I would give a 5 Star Rating to that Story.

No real father would relentlessly beat and abuse his daughter like that for loving him, way to much abuse.

Didn't want it to end. Great job!

your nonconsentual stories are your best stories. especially the ones that got pulled from literotica. i had to pause so many times in this story to just breathe because i was getting so excited.

I was enjoying your story . I too got hard my rock cock thinking about you and your dad having SEX . It was so nice your loving your daddy. Are you doing still sex with your Dad? Send me reply plz I'm waiting

I have read them all. Well written, imaginative, and sexually compelling.

I do find some of the male characters too brutal, cringeworthy so.

Nor do I have any use for the pregnancy fetish. I think pregnancy is stupid.

You use language well, but you do startle me when you confuse the verbs "to lie" and "to lay". Example: "I climbed in the back and LIED across the seats." What was she lying about? Was she telling falsehoods as she LAY across the seats? Neither interpretation makes sense. Of course, I know what you are trying to say. You, like many, are tripped up by the meaning and conjugation of these two awkwardly similar sounding verbs. Their misuse is rampant, mostly among the under educated.

Were I a writer, I'd look into this.

More stories, please!

This story made me cry, and different emotions started to fill my chest. It is realistic. And I know that many people think there is too much violence... but I read every single word without skipping.

Emotions that he felt was scary for him, and it scared him that his daughter and him felt these emotions that are forbidden. It scared him to the point that he got angry, he got angry and that made him think it was shameful to that point. You are an amazing writer, and this story is too. This story is deeper than other stories (from other writers, and that makes it even better.

This is the only story i've read of yours so far but i love it! You made me feel so many different things i was an emotional wreck for so much of it. And cried like a baby when she broke. I felt for her so much. Thank you so much for writing this, your style is amazing xx

You kept me hard throughout the whole story... Thanks

This story was awesome!

Awesome

You are by far my favorite author on this site. Please write more. I would love to read anything you've written.

I have just spent the last 3 hours going through all of your stories. But this by far is my favourite. By the way you are such an amazing author. I would pay to read your stories. Thanks for making my pussy wet and fulfilling a fantasy xx

I couldn't finish this story. I get that this is a story about incest, but the incest is completely overshadowed by the physical abuse this father is administering to his daughter. It really should be in the non-consent/reluctance category. I find absolutely nothing erotic about beating a woman or shoving a soap covered cock down her throat.

but all of the physical abuse was W-A-Y too much! I would've told him to F'off, rot in hell, & i'll never see you again, after what happened on the way to school, no way in hell, I would've gone chasing after him. Definitely wouldn't have gotten off that bus.

If he was sexually abusive, to the point of rape, with his daughter, how was he with his wife? Even being sexually frustrated, due to the loss of a family member, doesn't turn you into that big of a monster. Even for just a story, I still balled because of the excessive abuse.

Please write a book. Even for an erotic short story, your character development is always surprising. You're an nincredibls writer and each character exists as their own person and I admire that. I'm sure I would real anything of yours regardless of genre. I hope one day you get something published so we can read it somehow.

I love all your stories so much but the dad was such a heartless cunt

I loved this story so much. Only person to make me soaking wet and cry at the same time.

Well-written but I didn't like it. If he had stopped after he had punished her the first time, maybe. I admit that I should have read the author's note so my bad really, it's not like my taste should dominate literotica but PLEASE move this to the nonconsent/reluctance category, it is not BDSM, it's abuse and rape. Bdsm is always consensual and has clearly stated safe words and agreements. It is stories like this that gives bdsm a bad name. I understand people get turned on by rape (and that's ok) and that's part of the reasons why this story needs to be moved. I think you'd have a more appreciative audience there too.

I’ll be truthful, when I read your preface to the story, and the laundry list of fan-submitted “blender” items, I wasn’t sure I was going to like this story that much. As I was drawn into Summer’s world, my eyeballs desperately flirting across the screen (and my wet panties,) disagreed with that initial assessment. You did an excellent job interweaving all of those elements, and I especially liked the punishment scenes.

I’ve been perusing the site to get my Daddy fetish fix for a couple months now, but I usually end up scanning more than reading. I was totally immersed in your story, though, and my heart was pounding the whole time.

I’m also going to disagree with other people who complained about the lack of “safe, sane, and consensual” or safe words. I’m happy to read a writer who understands character development, storytelling, and how recklessly abandoning the real world of BDSM in this little fantasy is half the fun. I’ll be coming back to this one, literally, and reading your other material. In a couple of days. Need to pass out in my soaked sheets for now...thank you!

I can honestly say you're one of my favourite writers on here. You write really great fantasies while keeping it just this side of realistic. Your stories never fail to get me off, but the story itself is always a good one. This one in particular was a little more sadistic than I'd normally go for, but I found myself enjoying how fucked up it was getting, how much Summer was willing to take, and how far her daddy was willing to go to try and break her of her fetish. The reunion at the end was pretty fucking beautiful, too.

Also, that Journey reference was gold. Haha

5 fucking stars, just like all your stories. Looking forward to reading the last one and any others you might come up with.

Personally, I wouldn't mind reading another Brother/Sister story. ;)

Loved most of your other stories, but this was the exception. Getting off on beating and torturing a child takes a sick and twisted, f’d-up mind. No bones about it, ya gotta have some screws loose to enjoy inflicting that much pain on someone who’s virtually helpless. I understand those sick fuckers exist, but I’m disappointed that you felt it necessary to write for that audience.

You are by far my favourite author on, well, every website i read stuff like this on.

BUT THIS STORY MADE ME CRY😂😭. Poor girl. She was just being tortured, it seemed like there was no end to it. I wanted to stop reading because i was actually getting angry, but i couldn't. I had to finish this story. I needed some sort of closure 😂 and i am glad i did! I needed the satisfaction of the dad giving in and i'm glad i got that. This was so worth the read! 5 stars ✨

She should have gotten the ultimate revenge by losing her virginity to her uncle and her father having to watch knowing that he could have gotten it if he hadn't been so stupid plus losing his daughter on top of that.

It was disappointing that you spend 10 pages with her being punished and then in one page everything is perfectly fine. it would have been better drawing it out with him getting a taste of what he put her through instead of just showing up with your happy ending. She seriously needs to get some payback for everything she went through. Just my two cents worth.

Author I love you and your stories. I have to say though this the only story on this website that has made me cry.

There is nothing Vanilla about you. This was the HOTTTTTEEEESSSSTTT of all of your stories, I mean DAMN!!!!! I will be re-reading this one forever!!!! I need a cigarette and a drink!!!! My pussy and ass is sore just from the shear reading of this story. DAMNNNN!!!

Too dark for many pages. Like watching a train wreck in slow motion,

Well-written but not my cup of tea. My own fault though. You had an accurate disclaimer.

Loved it. Hated it. A bit over the top. It is not what BDSM is about. Too abusive

Hello, fans! I'm a little overdue on commenting on your comments for this story. I probably won't comment on this story again, unless you say something ridiculous, and I have to reply because ya'll acting crazy.

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—Mr_Uno

You skimmed? I can't blame you. No harm, no foul. I think my stories lately have really lightened up.

—Just read it for fun

Henry will go down as one of my rougher Daddies. I think I'm getting softer these days though.

—In School and Horny

I assume you're in university. This comment is 5 years old, so I hope you graduated successfully, but for all the uni students reading this, pay attention to your professor, or he'll punish you!! 😉

—I Read 12 Pages & Hell, A daddy getting a girl pregnant...

Readers are so polarized on pregnancy. I get comments "Get her pregnant with Daddy's seed!" or "Don't get her pregnant, that's disgusting!" Ya'll need to get on the same page. I can't please everyone. So, I'll tell you what: if you want my characters to get pregnant after the story, just imagine that happened. And if you don't, then it didn't happen. It's one of those "open to interpretation" endings.

—KINK

THANK YOU 😊

—Good against Evil

0 Stars? You have a golden heart, my friend. The world needs your stories, because as you said, all of your characters are perfect and treat their loved ones perfectly. It also needs me. If there is no darkness, how can your light shine through? And oh, how I'll make the world so dark for you to better shine in >=)

—Too much violence

No real father would do this? My friend, you're living in the same fantasy world as the golden boy above. Fathers, real fathers, can be fucking monsters, love or no love.

—Syrenzcal61

*hug* thanks

—Sadsophie

Don't be sad Sophie ☹ I hope my stories brought a smile to your face. I'm glad this one got you so excited!

—eroticHOT

My friend, your comment makes me think you think that I am a female telling a true story about my daddy and me. I'm male, and this story is fiction, written from the female POV. But let me say, your comment is super flattering, because it means my story was very believable! 😊

—I read all your stories...

Okay, yes, I fucked up the lay, lie, lied, lying verbs. I am embarrassed about all of my typos, and I apologize. I think it's rude to suggest I am "under educated" though. I mean, yes, I am under educated, but I'm trying! 😉

— I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT <3

Hey, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOU! <3 Yes, wasn't it all so emotional and heart wrenching? I love that it made you cry. I was a bit wrapped up in the story myself writing it, so I am glad I conveyed so much emotion.

— LilFuckmeatForBrutalDaddy

Without even reading the rest of your comment, if you didn't love this story, your username is a lay! I mean, a lie! Okay, but seriously, you're comment was very sweet, and I love that you were an emotional wreck. Xoxo

—Great Story

You're welcome. My story is like viagra, I guess! 😊

—Oh

You're awesome!

—Lovely

You're awesome too!

—More

Aw, your fave on Lit? 4 years later, I hope that's still true. Thank you 😊

—I have just spent 3 hours reading your stories

You are very welcome, and I am glad your pussy is so wet reading my stories. Spend another 3 hours reading me, and I'll have you wetter, I hope!

—irishmike73

Hey Mike. I do struggle with categorizing. It could be non-con, but it's also incest, and incest is the focus. The rest is incidental. And I had a warning.

—mesmerized

You balled? Even though this story was too much for you, I still take this comment as a compliment. Any story that can make you feel and cry and pull that emotional out of you is a rare and powerful thing. You won't find it in the next dozen clicks, I promise.

—Please write a book

Done. lol. Seriously though, I do intend to write more for you fine literotica folks. I hope you'll continue to read my stories over the years...

—I love all your stories

I love all your comments 😊

—I NEED MOREEE

You cried too? #3 I love that. Those who cried for this story, seriously, thank you for reading and letting me touch you (not like that... I mean, not that I wouldn't mind 😉).

—Mjae

I get your complaint and understand it. As for moving the story to another catagory, it's not possible after you publish. Not that I would move it if I could. As I said, to me it is incest, and the events don't define it. It's like saying Die Hard should be a romance because John kisses his wife at the end or a comedy because Ho Ho Ho he has a machine gun. That's all incidental. It's still an action movie, and this is still an incest setting. Now let's debate if it is a Christmas movie :P

—Going to read all your stories

Over the next few days!? You read so fast! Thank you for saying I did an excellent job building this one, and even liking the punishment scenes. What a compliment! And I do agree with you. In a real situation, pushing and pulling, the world is not "safe, sane, and consensual." Real life happens pretty fast...

— Akirababe87

Hey my friend. I've seen a lot of your comments, so thank you for reading so many of my stories. You're a true fan, and thank you for saying the ending was beautiful! You folks who read until the end deserved a happy ending. I actually teased there wouldn't be a happy ending in the author note just to keep your expectations low. And you know, I could go for another bro/sis story too. Maybe one day.

—You're Better Than This

You give me too much credit. I'm worse than this :P j/k but to be honest, as I wrote Henry, he took on a personality of his own, and his brutally demanded that he followed the punishments through. It was in his character, and I had to stay true to the man I felt I'd written.

—Shook

Aww, you cried!? Another one? #4. See, I'm so flattered to move you or anyone else to tears. I am glad I was able to pay off all that pain with such reward. That's what punishment is all about... You gotta give that aftercare.

—She should have gotten the ultimate revenge...

Lol, this story would have been 1 star and filled with furious comments with that ending!

— It was disappointing

You want payback? I think this wasn't in her personality. I don't feel the ending was rushed either. Henry came to the realization he had done wrong by her, and she did have a revenge of a sort. She left him, would have cut him out of her life. He felt that pain, the pain of losing his daughter, and it terrified him, so he went after her. That momentary loss he felt, it could have been forever, but she forgave him. She didn't have to. Forgiveness is powerful. That's love.

—SextKitten6969

Cry #5! I love you too. Thank you for reading.

—SoftKtty24

Haha, wow, if you re-read this story forever, I'm sure you'll see this comment. Thanks for coming back to it! Have a drink, a smoke, and an orgasm. You earned it after all 12 pages of this.

— woodward

A trainwreck is a shocking thing. You can look away? I'm a rubbernecker. I gotta see that trainwreck!

— Riktovi

Not your fault. Try another one of my stories. They're not all hard

— sucksexful

You loved it? Thank you! I stopped reading your comment there. I assume the rest of it was all good :P

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Thank you again for everyone who commented!

VanillaExtract, you are amazing. I never comment and I’m a bit weird in that incest isn’t a kink to me but I’m a mix of slave/little so anything Daddy related gets me going. Especially when some punishment and/or force is added in . Anyway, even though I normally don’t read incest stories I’ve read and re read many of yours because the Daddy factor gets me off and your stories are well… well written and speak to me. I actually like the Daddy POV a lot about some of your stories but I did like this one from the daughter POV and I loved Calling on Daddy from the daughter POV too. So now I’m not sure which I prefer but anyway, kudos for having a big fan from someone who isn’t turned on by incest. Your stories are THAT amazing ! Keep writing 😁

Xoxo Laura

Henry is a piece of shit

i need atleast one chapter add to their story

Cruel and inhuman

The story line is as expected. Quit using the the computer spell check and find a competent proof reader.

This was excellent. Well done.

I mean… the ending turned out alright. But I felt so bad for summer. She truly loved him but couldn’t see past the pain until it was too late.