All Comments on 'Summer Suspicions Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
to be continued?

i hope this isnt the end!

another great chapter, cant wait for more!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic

I hope that he gets Lacy to be his girl when his sister Lisa goes back to school.

Of course he'll still need to fuck his mom every night to keep her satisfied. Perhaps he could have a long slow loving afternoon fuck with his mom to make her feel like a teenager again.

A great story, thanks for the read...

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 12 years ago
Fantastic

But now that everyone knows about everyone will there be more to see if Lisa & Lacy can Share Luke. and will Mom continue to be apart of the Fun and Games.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story

Really enjoyed the story so far. Please, whatever you do, don't bring the dad in on it. The story is good as it is. Bringing him in would break the balance of it all. Hope to see a growing relathionship between luke, lisa and lacy and mom joining in. Lacy as public girlfriend and the other two as housewifes? And maybe mom is pregnant...

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 12 years ago
Nice series.

This was a very good series. I love how it ended. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Front to Back

Never back to front. The vagina does NOT like E Coli and all the rest of the nasty stuff back there. She could get seriously sick

And essentially dry fucking his sister's ass? There would be tearing for sure, with even a normal sized cock, much less his much larger than average one. Go ahead, pound her excessively hard once he's in, for effect, but don't do that

I don't care how excited he is, lying on his back, his cock will never "spring up"

Finally, Get an editor, please. You really do need one

AmbivalenceAmbivalencealmost 10 years ago
I call "Bullshit"!

If you're a guy and writing this, unless you're a masochist, no WAY are you OK with your balls being abused... no freaking way do you just accept an "I'm sorry".

If he doesn't do something to get even, he's not real and definitely not realistic. He should tie them down, and bring them to the brink and just keep going until it hurts them - and then continue. "How can you hurt me if you love me," they might stupidly think or ask...? "Fucking duh!"

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
When did Lacy shave?

Hair matched the carpet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Awesome story! This has been a lot of fun to read! :). My only obvious glaring complaints were addressed by 'Front to Back' below. You dont put a shitty dick in a nice, clean pussy! Long list of health problems from that! ...and of course the no-lube anal, ugh. Spit and pussy juice arent lube and dry up fast, she'd be bleeding in a hurry :/

...anyway, that shit aside, the story has rocked so far! Write on!! :)

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 7 years ago

Good thing that dad is stone deaf with all that screaming!!

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

Lol . GR8 fiction . In erotica there are no diseases . It makes it so much hotter .

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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