All Comments on 'Summer with Dad'

Another well-crafted and sexy story from silkstockings.

Silk

love your story...especially your spin on a daughter-dad theme something you have avoided in most of your stories.

As a guy I loved the new theme. ..

meh just same automaton slut with no depth who falls in love with a big cock regardless of who it is. there's no emotion or depth of eroticism yet it barely ranks as a stroke story because it isnt hot. Just making a slut who likes anal isn't eroticism it's bs writing no buildup just meh.

Sometimes it is difficult for young women to resist well hung older family member. Often other guys just don't measure up.

Great story that left me wanting to hear more.

As previously noted, this tale is new ground for you - daddy/daughter stories. The prologue and initial observations make the encounter more believable; however, I thought he would be more conflicted before plunging into all three ports.

Hope you will continue to develop more stories with this theme.

Holy fuck came harder than i ever have great story!!!

Please continue the story there are all kind of possiblities (the 2 daughters, Mother with Father, Father with other daughter, etc.)

Wow you did a great job. Please keep this series up and I hope you win the contest.

Please continue this story, You have a great series ahead if you do.

Reading your stories -- loved this one. Good pace on it. I wondered at one point if the lesbian mom was her own mother -- NY lawyer and all. Though perhaps there's a loose end to tie up. I'd be just as fine hearing how mom gets replaced and Daddy and Daughter shack up together permanently.

I gave this story 5 stars, which is not something I do often. Very hot. This is the first story I have read of yours, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I will have to check out some of your other stories now.

...but the sex dialogue went a bit over the top. (Still 4 stars, though)

I loved the sex dialogs ....dont change it...I need a part two ....to this story

Excellent. Part two please!

Even though I'm not personally into the kind of dirty talk and submission these two are, this was still hot as all hell. I loved the lesbian scene, too, and the dialog during. PLEASE tell me you're going to write more about Tia and Bethany, I'd especially love to read about their first time together.

We need part II - I am sure that Dad has several friends that would enjoy meeting his daughter

Looking forward to reading more of your stories

Please continue this amazingly hot story. A threesome with Tia? Josie, Tia & her daughter? So many possibilities that need to be explored. HURRY!!!

Great job, as usual. Can't wait for Bethany to return home. And perhaps Josie should decide to stay in Hawai'i, thus causing Mom to fly out for a confrontation, and get caight up in the web herself. Also, if Josie really wants to be a good slut, she should learn to be more "accepting" of Dad's bimbos. Keep up the good work.---Jedd

Josie needs to stay with her daddy and forget going home..... then have mom get mad come to get her and well.... you know

Best story I've read in awhile. Please continue.

Damn I loved this story, wish you would write more of this type. She is a submissive but is not treated as a piece of trash. A great story.

Agree with the last poster, though Ive never got off calling a girl a slut, kind of a turnoff actually. ....and uh, lube when you ass fuck!! He wants to fuck it, not watch it bleed or take her to the e.r.,.

Oh, and I REALLY could have gone without knowing she had been fisted, almost stopped reading right there! Ugh.

...otherwise it was pretty good, not my usual read, but still fairly enjoyable.

An 18yo loose enough to be fisted, after a couple months.... O.o Sorry, but gaping isn't my thing lol

While I like this story a lot, there was so much more teased about what will happen in the future that you need to continue this for at least another chapter, if not more. What happens when Josie meets Bethany? Does Josie have a three-way with mother and daughter? Does daddy get to have a three-way with daughter and Bethany? Do all four get together and form a new family unit? And what about daddy's continued training of Josie? Does Josie move in with daddy permanently and perhaps go to U of H? There are so many avenues left to explore that this story, by itself, feels incomplete.

Thanks to MAB7991 for editing this quickly

Valedictorian (valedictorian)

scholar student (REPETITIVE)

I ended (up) as my dad's fucktoy

DADDY, DADDY, pissed me off; only I got to call him DADDY

SLOWED down my inevitable orgasm by SLOWING down

couldn't see her FACE or her FACIAL expression

person being controller by my libido (controlled)

James daughter (James’s )

metropolitan (metropolis)

full time (full-time)

more relaxing then my last job (than)

fast paced (fast-paced)

you are wearing off on me (rubbing)

wear off peeeople (rub)

NEEDS that NEED

way to vague (too)

was am investment (an)

it seed like an eternity (seemed)

g-spot (G-spot)

TRIED to make my tongue a small cock as I TRIED to get inside her

expect for the occasionally face fuck (except) (occasional)

You should continue with another chapter. The pretext of things to come (or cum) lingers, as the father has the next few days off to spend training his new live in slut? How would the story line develop when Tia's daughter meets Josie? If they hit it off, would they exclude their dominate parents? Might Josie give up Harvard for the Univ. of Hawaii?

So many possibilities... But, the editing could use some improvement. -( Just would not say it in such a dickish way as the last Anonymous post) Again, You should continue with another chapter.

Hope you keep writing about these two, so hot!

Loved it. So fucking hot. A followup chapter is needed for those loose story lines such as Tia's daughter.

Fuck Harvard, fuck being a lawyer like uptight mommy, go to University of Hawaii and find her true calling career wise and stay with daddy since that is obviously her true calling in love.

Would like to see a pause of enjoyment between orgasms. You worked hard to get there, so just float for bit. Thanks

I really hope you continue this one too

This has the potential to make a good series. Could explore multiple storylines. Bring the mom out and put her in her place. Group action with the bar owner. You are a great writer! - AV

I loved rubbing my wet cunt as I read this story. I wanted to be that lucky little slut sucking Daddy's cock.

I don’t know. I really wanted to like it, but found it difficult. The narrator boasts of their genius level intelligence too often, even though they came off as enitrely average. For example—- using the word “ambiance” isn’t really what I would consider advanced, and a lot of her “quips” and “witty” retorts, were just normal replies.

Show us, don’t tell.

That said, I still think you’re a good writer. I didn’t feel a depth of emotion or as much tension as I would have liked, but you’re on top of your grammar and followed the plot. I hope you keep writing and honing in on those skills. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

The story was wonderful, not as good as your others. But I can’t help but want to know more. Does she go to Harvard in the fall? What happens with Tias daughter? Does she stay and work at the bar and get used by her dad and tia? Please let us know???

Good job!

Thanks for sharing.

Since I'm not a S or an M, I really don't understand the need for the 'slut' term. Since they are constantly professing their love for each other, it just doesn't mesh together in my mind.

Excellent story. Looking forward to the whole series. 😈

A continuity error in your story...

She throws her panties onto the table with the blue ones. Then Tia removes her panties on the beach?

Great story.

Loved the story. Father daughter incest is such a taboo turn on.

414. As usual you have left a lot of loose ends that could stand tying up if you choose except, of course, like most, you will leave us hanging and wondering. It was an interesting story, but among other future issues is, does she get pregnant?

The End??? There's the rest of the summer, Tia, her daughter, then her mother and what she does about college! I Swear as much as i LOVE your stories my Silk Mistress, I hate how you always leave me hanging for more!

(though I keep coming back like your good little man) lol

"When horny though, it seemed my 180 IQ dissipated and I became a different person being controller by my libido."

While proclaiming an IQ of 180, one should not write "controller" when the sentence calls for the word "controlled", especially in the same sentence!

Sweet and simple I LOVED THIS STORY

WOW REALLY OT.

Would love a few more chapters