All Comments on 'Summer with Family'

by Sebastian123

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

so are you resubmitting this series? i enjoyed it and was hoping you'd continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
other possibilities...

This would have been a lot hotter if Brandi had a son she was involved with. Hopefully, Tyler gets involved with Aunt Brandi and maybe they can invite Tyler's mom to come for a visit. A menage a trois between the three of them sounds great. Plenty of potential here.

lantern04lantern04about 7 years ago
Love it.

I'd love to see more in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Why the repost and rename?

This was first posted as "Summer with Aunt Brandi's Family Ch. 01" a little over a year ago. You got up to three chapters and just stopped. Those are gone.

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Unless this is all you are reposting, the lack of a chapter number to indicate is not a complete story is also puzzling, especially since you used them last time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Abby....

Holly shit she was hot.....great story...need alot more...

thank you...please more of this story....5 stars

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 7 years ago
getting hot

hope you plan to write some more of this story it could be fun to play with all the girls. In Australia cousins can have a relationship and marry. These girls should be on the pill or have an implant if they are sexually active these days.

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 7 years ago
Glad it's back

Really enjoyed the story the first time around and am enjoying it just as much now. I look forward to the next chapters and beyond.

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
awesome...why noy on the pill? this is CA

cousin # 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love the story keep coming with more.

Great story with lots of possibilities keep them coming. Involve the uncle to if you can.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Involving the father would spoil this story, but is this second time around? I'm sure I've read this before.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
California permits first cousins to marry.

The family may find it to be taboo, but the state of California permits first cousins to marry and/or to live together and have sex without legal interference.

chytownchytownabout 7 years ago
Thanks***

For sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I ONLY read incest stories because it's mostly romance

I don't like fuck stories and this one was just that so 1 star just to vote...

goducks1goducks1over 6 years ago
i like the story.

i like the story. i read this before starting chapter 2, which i hope is as good or better. my only complaint is hopefully you'll finish chapter 3 soon - i see it took almost a year for chapter 2!!! keep on writing!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 6 years ago

Very hot!! Wondering if mama is going to get to play?

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
A Beginning with Potential

Do you think this is what his parents had in mind when they sent him away for the summer?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
6/10

There were quite a few typos. Abby's decision to fuck Tyler could have been paced better, I was actually fairly certain the beginning of the second page was a dream sequence, it seemed so unbelievable. Overall an enjoyable read though, and I think it has god potential.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Sebastian123,

You have an amazing story developing here please continue the good job.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 4 years ago

Nice job on this one, S123. Whew!

Wash2015Wash2015almost 3 years ago

Just found you as an author and am loving your writing. I am sorry I missed the previous additional chapters and I really hope that you continue with all of these stories. They are great starts but definitely need to keep going.

garthoggarthogalmost 3 years ago

Coming from someone that actually did fuck his cousin, this is delicious!

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