by Sebastian123
so are you resubmitting this series? i enjoyed it and was hoping you'd continue it.
This would have been a lot hotter if Brandi had a son she was involved with. Hopefully, Tyler gets involved with Aunt Brandi and maybe they can invite Tyler's mom to come for a visit. A menage a trois between the three of them sounds great. Plenty of potential here.
This was first posted as "Summer with Aunt Brandi's Family Ch. 01" a little over a year ago. You got up to three chapters and just stopped. Those are gone.
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Unless this is all you are reposting, the lack of a chapter number to indicate is not a complete story is also puzzling, especially since you used them last time.
Holly shit she was hot.....great story...need alot more...
thank you...please more of this story....5 stars
hope you plan to write some more of this story it could be fun to play with all the girls. In Australia cousins can have a relationship and marry. These girls should be on the pill or have an implant if they are sexually active these days.
Really enjoyed the story the first time around and am enjoying it just as much now. I look forward to the next chapters and beyond.
Great story with lots of possibilities keep them coming. Involve the uncle to if you can.
Involving the father would spoil this story, but is this second time around? I'm sure I've read this before.
The family may find it to be taboo, but the state of California permits first cousins to marry and/or to live together and have sex without legal interference.
I don't like fuck stories and this one was just that so 1 star just to vote...
i like the story. i read this before starting chapter 2, which i hope is as good or better. my only complaint is hopefully you'll finish chapter 3 soon - i see it took almost a year for chapter 2!!! keep on writing!
Do you think this is what his parents had in mind when they sent him away for the summer?
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There were quite a few typos. Abby's decision to fuck Tyler could have been paced better, I was actually fairly certain the beginning of the second page was a dream sequence, it seemed so unbelievable. Overall an enjoyable read though, and I think it has god potential.
Sebastian123,
You have an amazing story developing here please continue the good job.
Just found you as an author and am loving your writing. I am sorry I missed the previous additional chapters and I really hope that you continue with all of these stories. They are great starts but definitely need to keep going.