All Comments on 'Sunbathers'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Another classic Ashon ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
always end up enjoying

Most of your stories have the women ending up enjoying being violated - if you are really going to write these, maybe you should have a few where that just doesn't happen? Such as:

"Well, I thought you'd end up enjoying this as much as I did, my mistake," he said, grinning as he zipped up. Then he walked away down the beach, taking my bikini with him, leaving me totally nude...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Site rules - Not allowed to have an unhappy victim.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another STALE Ashson ending

Why write the same story over and over and over?

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