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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More please this could get hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Waiting for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think Ray fell in LUST! According to reports Robin isn't far behind!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

An interesting style for a number of reasons, but as with any writer, you should find a good editor, whom you're comfortable working with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

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I have some stories here under "oldhippie1949" and under the name "fendelle". I'm fun, handsome, erudite and creative. Ideally, I'd love to find a female with similar desires. I live alone and am often lonely. These stories help me to relive those mostly r...

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