All Comments on 'Surprise'

Oh Yes, his horny sister has finally found the reason to act on her feelings with her brother, his breakup with Sandie. She acted and now he knows his hidden feelings must be acted upon hopefully. Hopefully, he will have the will to return the favor to his sister and then progress to hard sex and as she knows, his heavy balls will unload his hot juice inside her ?? We need more and hopefully; the next chapter will be just as well written and arousing. Thank you.

What a wonderful; dream, hope to have every night

5 star niccccce

I don't know what it was. Maybe the shortness. Maybe your style. I very much liked this.

more please this could get really interesting

Very short, but you warned me. Pretty obvious where it was going. Maybe you shouldn't have mentioned the sister until the very end. For the record there was a typo - I think you meant impending orgasm, not impeding. Overall a good story, though. Thanks.