All Comments on 'Surprise'

Nicely constructed tale. I have noticed a couple of typos that could have changed the meaning of sentences. Otherwise I liked it. Thanks.

Hopefully you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed the reading and fantasying about it.

I really enjoyed it. Definitely a five star effort. You have a wonderful mind. Your husband or lover or partner must be more than pleased with you. I'm sure the sex is as exciting and fulfilling as it was for Ellie in the story. I'm in N.H. Wish you were here!

I would love to receive the Surprise ( Jake) that Ellie received. He's sexy and sensual !! Who needs a threesome when you have Jake !!

Great job Neutona