by BlewWater69
Why is it that the men always fuck around while thinking on the women in their lives? If he has real doubts about Elly and the farm I seriously doubt that screwing other women will solve his property acquisition problems. I just hope this is a one time occurrence and the story regains its bearing with next chapter, or you should consider switching categories from now on.
I'm most definitely a guy, but I'm a romantic guy. This story has sefinitely turned. Make Jack come to his senses in the next chapter. Otherwise change categories as this lost track.
I thought this was supposed to be romantic? First chapters were building fairly well, and then this. In a romance you need to develop the emotional relationship between Jack and Elly, if he is screwing around then fine, ok, I understand they really don't have a defined relationship yet. But no reason to expand on those occurrences just so you can add sex to the chapter. We need to read about the ROMANCE, be it emotional or physical, between the main characters.
I'm disappointed this is not a Romance. It's a guy screwing multiple women.
Chapter 1 was great, working up to a beautiful romance story. I was disappointed with change of direction this story went in this chapter. I can understand his apprehension but fucking his way out of it. Really. I certain hope he gets is act together in the next chapter...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Story is great! I understand this chapter was for developing the story. Thank you!