by curious2c
Great story but I seem to have missed the ending somewhere. I appreciate that they plan on building a place there, but what about Sandra and some sense of closure?
I think that another chapter is warranted just to tie up all the loose ends.
There is much more to be written here. Where do they build the house? How does Sandra stay involved? You need to tell us.
This is a great story, but it definitlyneeds more. What happens next?
I really loved the dom piece with bill I think it would be cool if bill had sandra wear nipple rings and rings put on her labia and her clit and put in print property of Bill hands off Lets see more
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
I loved the entire series for what it was intended. Pure Porn. Great erotica at its most graphic. A 5 Star Rating for the series.
A bit over the top, but it is a stroke story, nothing else
Scores 3/5
Let’s see where the sequel takes us