by curious2c
I truly hope May is the right one for Bill ?this reminds me of "Patricks Marriage"where he went to glaciew bay at the lodge he met Cheryl and her family i think you should have mixed that family into this story they would have been perfect in this story with Bill and Maythe daughter would have been great with Ann jan and may you should try in the next chapter.
Pat.
loved most of the story so far, just wish there was a little more story and a little less sex. You've had everyone doing everyone so many times that it's getting a little boring during the sex scenes.