All Comments on 'Susan'

A lovely dirty, lust fuelled story, perfectly written. I thoroughly enjoyed it and look forward to more with these highly sexed characters. Great writing, got me so hard and leaking precum.

Not quite sure how this ended up in nonconsent, she didn't seem that reluctant to me! Hot story though and,of course, Kelly has to join in

The plot for the story is great, but the actual sex scene in this chapter was practically non-existent. I hope you'll give the readers a longer and more descriptive scene or scenes in the future.

I think I'm missing page 0 because there was absolutely no seduction.