All Comments on 'Susan & Steven Call on Me'

I like this story very much. but if u add in ur story the bisexuality that will be more tarrific. The bibisexuality mean the man on man. If u add some fun which could be hapened in between ur brother and lover that will give more pleasure. and if u add some type of seducing the other person just like to peeping in ur brother room with other guy or girl or peeping of ur brother in ur room with other guy that will creat more fun to the readers. any how i love ur submission very much and hope that i will be there with ur brother and u and get a chance to lick ur pussy and ur brothers cock.

thanks.

Hey! boxlicker I licked your story very much. you are a very talented writer! the only dissapointment I had with the story is....that it ended!