All Comments on 'Susan Clarke'

Those of you who have read me for a while know my position on comments, that I don't care what others think, I write for myself and then offer to share and if those sharing don't like the story-tough shit! However, there has been a change. I recieved an email from a reader that has caused me to change my mind. Just because I don't care, why should I deprive the reader of the right to express themselves?

Just as Literotica is a forum where I can express myself Public Comments is a forum for readers to expres themselves and it costs me nothing to let them do it.

Starting with this story all of my stories will be open for Public Comment. Have at it!

Just Plain Bob

You've written several good stories I would have liked to comment on.

I know you like to keep 'em short and sweet but it would have been interesting to know what hubby's reaction and thoughts were when he came home.

Never a question of talented ability or relentless volume - your mind churns and pumps out highly imaginative well written material prolifically.

But you never cared before - interesting you gruff person - listen it is ok to change for both sakes if you can.

This is a nice consequence of change. Almost a type of respect - almost. Well, baby steps are good and appreciated! with Regard

that because of him and his friends he no longer has parents that live together ...and a father that disowns him ...if this happened to me i would divorce the bitch and tell the son that he was no longer welcome at my house ...if he was the only son well whatever inheritance he would have got would go to charity after my bills were paid off lol if i had any money left i might just spend it all so there wouldnt be any any way hubby will find out ..it always comes out in the wash .... no father and a slut for a mother ...poor kid ... well at least he has his friends ..maybe daniel will let him fuck his mother also to make up for it

I didn't care for the story but I always read them, as you are a very gifted writer. To me that’s worth a 50 at least. You are taking comments, fine but it’s a shame they don’t have to be registered so at least you could rant at some of us when the mood might hit you. It would also make people stand behind what they rage about and maybe be more civil. Hell, you don’t care about civil!

Thanks for your writing

I'lll give you a 25 for effort.Was ok till you put the incest in it.I hope hubby finds out and takes her for everything.If and when the incest comes out the judge might even put her sorry ass in jail.I hope the son enjoys that he now no longer has a family. and maybe just maybe he will have to get a job and go to work as his gravy train might just be cut off.It says nothing about her working maybe her son can pimpher off to his friends at least till he finishes college.her hubby will get everything and leave them with nothing.Serves them right. It might bring a degree of reality back into their lives to be cut off for awhile. If she is good looking like you say she might make enough off whoring till she can get a job .Ater all she will need a real job when her looks do leave her and realistically what can she look forward to, maybe another 5 or 7 years before not even bums will want her sorry ass.her son will eventually want a girl his age to marry .Who knows though he might be to ashamed to admit that he ever fucked his mother.He might end up without a mother or father.No education and doing manual labor to make a living.Seems like daniel is the only one who made out.Maybe Todd needs to tell his family maybe he can fuck Daniels mother also.Incest is wrong for whatever reason.Everything else was bad but incest is immoral and just wrong. stick with what you do best. your revenge stories are usually great, stay off the sick shit

but not a bad story. Your reader Was ok Till 22-9-06 seems to have major issues, maybe he she or it is an incest suvivor. He/she forgot the rot and die in hell. I did not figure out just why she thought one of the boys had not put out a call adn gotten additional friends over, could have been 6-8 boys in house, could have been incest.

It reminded me of the mother of one of my friends she had the biggest tits I ever saw. She fucked half the neighborhood boys including me when I was just 14. Took my cherry and many others. That was before AIDs and other nasty things.

Husband should have taped the gangbang then showed it to the whole town and everyone in the family.

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga.

Husband should have taped the gangbang then showed it to the whole town and everyone in the family.

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga.

So as soon as I read he son is in college I stopped reading and gave it the 1* it deserves.

I especially like that there's a faint chance she didn't( unkwowenly) bump uglies with the son, she probably did. Doubt and confusion are underrated as aphrodisiacs.

Note to previous commentator: nothing but nothing is hotter then a woman in her forties who keeps it tight. They have to pay the price to look good - with 18 to twenty something females : they look great but it's a function of their age: their lottery winners who don't merit their wealth.

When I see a woman of a certain age : it's somehow a turn on to think of the price paid in restrained diets and exercise. You just know they are fighting the good fight and my heart and libido flutters with empathy in tandem with my balls tightening.

Ha, A Happily Married Woman no more. Her son should be proud that he helped turn his mother into a slut. Obviously she will no longer be satisfied with just her husband. At the first chance she gets, she will be trolling for young, strange cock. The boy's next holiday visit will have to be to two homes if he wants to see both of his parents.

It is too bad as this could have been a great story. Simply put it in the Incest category and have the mother be a widow or divorcee. As it is and since it does not describe the obvious consequences, I gave it two stars.

Many authors who leave stories unfinished, as I believe this one is, give the reason that they are allowing their readers to use their imaginations. Frankly, if we wanted to do that we could just imagine our own stories and not need to read yours.

Please keep writing though. You do put out some good ones.

this was good story-will there be more who was the last guy to fuck her

And your point was what? Another failed JPB story without an ending.

more, more please !!!!

hopefully nigger fucking aids-whore gets aids from this

or soon from wherever .

5* worth

Another unfinished nasty story from Bob. I hope the last one was Ralph.

The divorce and or the birth with a dna test.

After reading - Susan Clarke - I think the hidden plot is that Susan was 'set up' by Ralph and Todd. We don't know their intentions but maybe they looked at Susan - wife, mother, choir member, Sunday school teach, and troop leader - as needing to break out of her box, explore her sexuality and experience some eroticism. So a plan was hatched. During Spring Break Todd would bring home a few friends and Ralph would conveniently have an out-of-town business trip. So the time came to execute their plan and either Daniel drew the 'short straw' or the others decided he should go first and 'break the ice' with Susan. Todd and the rest of the friends then left the house leaving Daniel alone with Susan. The stage was set. Daniel was now the predator and Susan was the prey. And as it happens in nature, Susan, the prey, naturally decides to unintentionally put herself in a vulnerable position (she's naked in her bathroom) where she thinks she's safe and secure. But from that safe and secure place she spots the predator and she freezes. Her instincts fail her. She lacks the ability to act. So she stares at the predator. She knows what's coming and that she should fight or flee but for some unexplainable reason she succumbs to her situation. She accepts her fate. The predator moves in. Now she's overcome by the size and strength of the predator. The predator knows this but rather than taking her now he plays with her until she has completely surrendered to her fate. She know that the predator is going to take her. And when the predator senses that she has fully accepted her fate he takes her. And he takes her again. And then he leaves her for the rest of group to have their fill of her.

What we don't know, and shouldn't guess, is Ralph's and Todd's true intentions. Was this Spring Break affair for their benefit or for Susan's. Did Ralph and son Todd get a high from Susan being taken by a group of young studs. And did Todd participate.

Maybe this story does need an epilogue.

Good story - 5.