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ineedutwoineedutwoover 11 years ago

Keep going!! Maybe both will be in it

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 11 years ago
Good start

I liked this very much. You seemed to hit it right on point with describing the young girls feelings. I got a bit confused on the sudden change from being at the scene of the accident and then instantly in this older man's house. Not enough to take away from the story though. More to come????

4 stars.

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...

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