All Comments on 'Suzie's Lessons Ch. 07'

I have been waiting for this chapter. This has been one great story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't make me wait so long for the next one!

Woderfull story... so far... please post more

This is a very involving, sexy story with engaging characters.

I do want to suggest, though, that Ecstasy is not a highly credible candidate for the drug in question. While it might well intoxicate, loosen inhibitions, and heighten sensation (there's a reason it's called "Ecstasy"!), it would not have the effect of rendering the victims unconscious or robbing them of memory.

The so-called "date rape" drug, "Roofie" (Rohypnol) would be a more likely suspect. I don't mention this to "popularize" the drug (or, for that matter, to encourage the use of Ecstasy or any illegal drug), but simply to correct the possible misinformation. Young ladies who may have had their concerns raised by this story may wish to google the relevant terms and inform/protect themselves.

I was really enjoying the story, until I got to the conspiracy of silence surrounding the rape of Mary. That really pissed me off. Its an example of the promotion of a defenseless mindset and it is one of the reason there are so many repeat criminals, particularly rapists, walking around. Mary is so worried about her reputation that she is willing to allow other women to be raped. It is just the same as if she stood by passively and did nothing while watching another women be raped. All it takes for evil to thrive is for good people to do nothing.

I am sorry that my comments are so negative. I generally think you are a great author, but I think your approach on this subject was totally wrong.

how the rape issue was handled. IMO, they should have gone to the police immediately instead of covering up (destroying the evidence, etc). I know this is erotica and not CSI or a police story, but some authors also deal with crime and incorporate the resolution in a better way. I still think that this is a good story (regarding the 'sexual awakening') but there are parts that I don't agree with. I still respect the author for his talent and consider him as a very creative writer considering the various novelletes that he has written here.

The story is about teen girls. These are not responsible adults... they freaked out and did what many would argue is the wrong thing. Regardless of your personal opinion, this is a highly erotic story with engaging characters. Just because these characters do not make the choices you would does not make the story 'stupid' ... just the opposite, it makes it more Real.

As I posted in the first chapter (5) dealing with this subject, I'm not crazy about the subject matter in erotica (thus the 75), however the Author is deciding the course we're on, we as Readers can change stories or stay along for the ride.

I for one intend to see this through, and likely go back to read others by this author.

Thanks for your time,

M

Man you write like a real author you have steamy sex in great details that make my pussy wet instantly. Although unlike most porn authors you gave it a deep story and put a lot of thought into this keep up this awesome work if i could i would pull a Suzie on you.

How can you change the name of someone in chapter 4 Curt's younger brother was named Chad but in this chapter you had him as Kyle...