All Comments on 'Sweet Bliss'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes, Wichita, Kansas, a city with a population of about 400000 in the '90s (metro only), had only 1 male birth on July 23.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would love to see where the story could go from here!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like that there were many smaller stories. Good characters and development. I'm just a reader, so no technique comments or nasty personal comments :) 5*

teedeedubteedeedubover 2 years ago

Good tale. The ending was predictable and rushed. But who am I to say........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

very good, needs a follow-up

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12/4/2023 Our next story is scheduled to be released today. Reading a letter to Dear Abby in last week’s paper inspired our most recent submission. The letter delt with a wife writing Dear Abby wanting to know if it was normal for her husband to “please himself” on a daily b...