All Comments on 'Sweet Cyn Ch. 02'

I've been waiting this long for this? It was so sweet b4...what happened? I'm devastated... 3some next? :-(

Wow, this story is getting hotter and hotter. Can't wait for the next part.5+

this could be a romantic tale between jon & cyn, dont kill it. it was funny, exciting & sweet, this chapter seems haste & 'mom' ruined it. hope there will be another funny, romantic tale from you, really like your ch.1.

Definitely looking forward to chapter 3.

Hoping to read more of this fun story!

I agree with the others, the first chapter was sweet and funny and romantically inclined. What the hell was the second? It seems just a set up for chapter 3. Do not bring others including mom into their love affair. Thanks for the story

What an idiot I was. Normally, I always check the comments and publishing sections to gauge and veryfy if the story has and end; otherwise, I will not bother to read it. I was lazy, and did not check. This story is from 2013, so... we've been had by another writer wannabe. Typical at Literotica, but what do you expect for free.

The first chapter was well done. The story line was well developed, and clearly presented. Very sweet, brother/sister falling for each other. This chapter (2), what was that? Ruinned. I can see what would be next: the mother, female friends, and what have you. Just your regular fuck fest, where all the females are lesbo/bi.

Got me