All Comments on 'Sweet Spot Ch. 02'

And so glad you're writing about Paul. I felt so bad for him in the other series. Thanks for telling his story.

So well-paced, nice and slow. There is something endearing about Paul and Andy together because of their backgrounds.

Podga...

This was a lovely chapter... Lot of history...

Liked it a lot.

Congratulations...

Love,

Le8mebee

I love this story...

I like this story and I liked these two men. I really like what Andy said about coming out and it being each person's own decision; that goes along with what I believe. But I do think Paul needs to come out soon so he can control it; otherwise, he runs the risk of being outed like Andy was.

I get to read from you again. Been checking your page every single day for a good read. Luv andy and paul. Good job darlin. 1001 stars!

You have done it again Podga - another really good chapter. Loved it !!!

Good to see Paul coming out of his shell and talking to Andy about his past and his family, he really needs to talk I reckon.

"stupid Scandinavian hair" - hmpf !!! never heard of lol

Podga,

I am so very happy to see you again here. Your stories are my favorites. Thank you!

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"Can I crush you some more?" I think that's my favorite line from this chapter. It's a subtle play on 'have a crush on' as well as a sign that this relationship has potential.

Oh, and I came across one of your rare slips: "You're always crushing me," he whined a bit breathlessly, looking up into Paul's laughing eyes. - should be Andy's laughing eyes. Just in case you ever want to publish this story, which I think you should as well as all your other stories.

as your my friend your hot my little writer.lol

I still haven't quite forgiven you for not having Andy suggest that Paul should have gone to Denmark to come out, rather than Sweden or The Netherlands. Especially when Andy's mom apparently has Danish roots.

But otherwise another awesome chapter, so good that Paul found someone like Andy just at that point in his life. Like he says himself: a great consolation prize :-)