All Comments on 'Sweet Treats'

by ElectricBlue

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LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeover 4 years ago
Weirdly arousing

A lithe and polite dancing girl with such long hair... She seems familiar. But no, your hairy wolf girl is something I haven't seen before. That was a fun romp through a fetish buffet. Clearly their was a favorite dish, but it was fun to sample a wide variety.

Sara2000ZSara2000Zover 4 years ago
What a tale...

and with so many twists and turns, EB! Fun and fevered writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bizarre

It prompts me to ask you why you wrote it, and myself why I read it. I got nothing. Just 'bizarre'.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 4 years ago
Very Erotic!

So erotic and as she put it, very naughty! I loved the story and hope you do well!

vanmyers86vanmyers86over 4 years ago
Well done!

I found this compelling, skillfully written and paced, with just the right amount of erotic horror/occult to make it a nearly perfect Halloween story. This is not a genre I have read much, but I am glad I took the time to read this tonight. Best of luck with the contest!

Van

doobiusdoobiusover 4 years ago
Style and originality

You set the standard. A truly original story. The plot had style and the writing style was good as ever

JackobinJackobinover 3 years ago
Simply one of the best

A rich confluence of fetishes. Very well done. Right to its unexpected and dominant end. Bravo.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

You take me places I've never been or even considered.

Your imagination keeps me on edge.

I can hardly wait to pleasure myself later. Thank you xox

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 year ago

Excellent!

The variety of fetishes was perfect for me!

Seductive, arousing, erotic, and yes…orgasmic!

Thank you….

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.