All Comments on 'Swimming with Carrie'

Who's your editor? ;)

Another great story, I never tire of reading your stuff!

I have read ur stories over the years and this is great and hot as all the others look forward to more.

Thanks,

Deb

Unexpectedly tender for the subject matter...loved it.

Brilliantly written. You have a lovely,literary voice.

I like the way you reworked it! Good luck in the contest! x

you don't just write porn, you write well. big difference.

Enjoyed the story, and the excellent writing immensely. Thanks for another good one, and good luck in the contest.

All in all I had a great time reading it! You have a nice, smooth writing style that flows easily on the eyes :)

Steamy, erotic, with just enough romance sprinkled in. I love it.

I do so love your trips through my old stomping ground I love that place but couldn't live there now to busy no fun anymore, or am I just too old. But I enjoy your stories written with wit and knowledge and a sharp nib, keep it up as long as you can and I and people like me will keep on reading .

She was ducking her lecturer, then just fall in lust, love with her uncle. Just like that?

Slut

ahh...so you ruined the entire book in the last few paragraphs, sad that I wasted my time. But maybe it was a typo, because you had 2 previous pages to mention that uncle Patrick was step-uncle Patrick, and the tags you used were misleading as well. There are people that feel more comfortable with the word step before a family member title if fucking is happening, but then there are people, like me, that respects that everyone has their own kink, just don't trick me into reading yours by convincing me it's mine until the very end. sucks cause I don't really hate the story, but I'm still giving 1 star for the step uncle twist.