All Comments on 'Swimming with Mum Ch. 06'

Story is going great!

This is a wonderful story. I look forward to each installment. Cheers for sharing.

In my years on this site, I have not followed a storyline as anxiously as I have this one. In fact, I get up at 6 AM when the new days stories are posted to discover the next chapter. If you permitted rating on your stories, this would get a 5. You don’t, so I can give it 6 out of 5!

Well, everyone in the story has been honest with each other…except Dave, who has not admitted his pining for Lydia, and Georgia, who seems to not be 100% into Dave. That’s how I see it. Just get D & L together, will ya?!

Marvin

Whoops, missed it! I did give you 5*!

Marvin

I'm living for this story! Each installment can't come fast enough! Great work

As a fellow Scot this might sound biased but great story with believable development.

I too always look forward to Mrs MacKenzie’s next instalment. Rxx

Keep them coming, please!

I find myself checking up on your profile a couple times a day hoping that the next chapter has been uploaded, loving the story so far!

Another cracking installment. Action hotting up nicely and the narrative is as good as ever. 5 stars

This story is really heating up.

Well done. An excellent story line that makes one eager for the next chapter.

Hotter

5*

BJ