All Comments on 'Swinging'

so bad

The Loving Wives section is the MOST contentious category on Literotica. Your stories and success have been in other categories. After reading this train wreck it would probably be best if you stayed in those "other" categories. Your writing isn't good enough for this category. In this case you have unlikable characters spouting ridiculous dialogue and doing really stupid things. Hinting that your stories are "true" is another mistake. You're on a porn site, on the world wide web. NO ONE believes a single word coming out of your mouth and onto the pages. Telling us that something is "true" just makes us laugh at you and does nothing for the story line.

1 star

I agree completely with anonymous comment, wish I could acknowledge him. He said everything that needs to be said about this effort.

It was a fun read.

Ignore our local little triggered bitches, they can't stand anything but their misogynistic women hating crap stories.

That was a very nice little recount of your encounter. I hope you will stop by and share some more. Also, you remind me of one of my wifes friends :)

He contacts couples, but is not bisexual. Why bother.

Next time write this as a proper bull story, and then dig shit into all the cucks as he fucks the women.

Not sure why this is in loving wives.

1*, nothing more needs to be said

I think it scores so high because there are more open minded people than closed minded idiots!

Great story. Loved the read.