All Comments on 'Sword of Anzul Ch. 01'

I'm very impressed with the concept of the story and your style or writing. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and leaving more comments to.

What the fuck?? Nice writing style, but weird as hell. And I'm afraid not in the least erotic.

You really need to finish this story, I want to know what happens next. You are an incredibly creative writer!

This is the most utter rubbish and should not be placed before the public in any format.

This is the most imaginative erotic story I have read. If only the sword could have been used on her again and again.....

I ditched this story part way through roughly when it got really weird, there really wasn’t anything sexy or arousing in there after the weirdness started. Truly disturbing.

So I guess thanks for that you’ve saved me an awful lot of time, I’ll just move to a different author without bothering with anything else that you’ve written.

Hello, I'm wondering if you are going to continue this story?