All Comments on 'Sylvan Courtyard: Ch. 02 - Settling In'

nice

good chapter 2

Most enjoyable. Looking forward to future installments. The academic life is really, really hard. Ahem.

Rea)y enjoying this, and can't wait for the next chapter.

Up to your usual enjoyable standards, although I think that Our Hero has it a bit too easy. I won’t suggest any plot points around that… I’m sure it’s all well in hand, so to speak.

I'm lovin' it.

If this story keeps improving the wait between chapters will be torture. Please keep up the great work.

The lucky dog! Always had a thing for Tinkerbell....

Dude, Naughty Tinkerbell! I think I’m in love. You could have written the whole series about her and I’d be in. Great chapter.

Thanks Publius. I don’t know if you are inspired by the Federalists or the Roman revolutionary, either way your nom de plume is easy to remember! Your stories are my go-to reads on this site. I very much appreciate the nerd in you in Dungeons and Dicks and the appreciation of university life, private schools and the South.

Please don’t stop!!

Btw if you would like an additional pair of eyes to pick up the odd typo, I’d be pleased to do that for you. (Boor vs bore for example)

I really appreciate your work. Hats off to you!

I'm still thinking that Josie has been watching all of this.

I’ve become a huge fan of your writing. I had thought some of your earlier series would be hard to beat, but this is a lot of fun. Well done and thanks!

Lovely premise.

Wondeful back story/setup.

But sex, when it became more than watching and teasing was MUCH too rapid.

Needed more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay. Needed more teasing. Needed more discussing how each liked what was happening, and what each would like next.

Maybe some dialog about whether each had masturbated to thoughts of the other. How often? What did he/she visualize while masturbating?

Show me how you masturbate. I'd like to learn what you like.

And it's TINKER BELL, two words. It's neither TINKERBELL nor TINKERBELLE.

Four stars.