All Comments on 'Sylvia’s Story'

Thank you so much for sharing this .

Very well written

Michael

Really great work. I appreciate the slow burn and the (ever so rare) realistic writing from a feminine perspective. Very hot story!

More over dependence on spell/grammar check or ESL . Stuff like this all through what could be a good story, therefore a two star not 4 . eg: "My son had his hand on the back of my neck to guide me towards his crouch. " towards his crouch ?

That was excellent! Eloquently written and detailed, I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

This story was amazing. Including your other one that relates to it prior. So Perfect and beautifully written. I can’t wait to read what the future holds for this mother and her son as they continue their relationship including along with the other pair. I so long to wish for a romantic and sexual high such as this in my life that they share. I’m envious. Look forward to your continuations

Really enjoyed this. I hope you'll continue their story.

"To be continued?"

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Nine (9) Literotica pages (about 85-90 in Word or Google Docs) and you're STILL not done!?

I loved it!

I think it should have been at least 2 parts. Part 1 is David and Mom development, Then Part 2 would bring Amanda and Robbie into it. It felt like part 2 was a bit rushed

Fantastic!

Please continue, you've left lots to explore

Continued? Yes, please.…it is a good story with a sensual buildup between conflicted desire and passion. Nothing is rushed as the characters try to deal with their emotions, making for building tensions , resulting in a good story. Now, , while your write another, I will find and read the first story.

This is really well done. 5 stars for sure. (Because I can't give more than 5.)

This was hot.

Great story keep up the fantastic work!! One of my all time favorites

Cant wait for part three. Swapping and Mom on Mom sounds good.

this was incredible. you could absolutely do a part three from amanda’s perspective. i’d like to see both perspectives if possible, just to check in with each couple. 5 stars easy

Might be one of the best mother son incest stories on Lit. Please continue.

Superb and clever. Well done and please write more.

Omg I'm so wet I need more

Love Sherri

It's nice to have you back. I missed you.

More please ( love risky Creampie's)

Hands down the best story on this site. Loved your style of writing, the build-up and you made the scenery believable. 10/10, please grace us with more submissions ❤️

This is (hands down) the best mother and son incest story on this site. Hell, not only is it the best incest story, but it’s the best overall story on the entire site (of any genre). I’ve been sitting here for the last ten minutes in total disbelief at just how good this story was. You don’t necessarily need to continue this story, but PLEASE write more mother and son stories!!

Yes, please continue. This is one of, if not the best mother / son incest stories I have read in years. The delicate dancing between them with the intertwined frustration and lust sent this over the top for me. If you don’t continue with this story please continue to write. I love your story, your style and your framing of characters with background and real life included. 5*

Five Stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What an excellent story ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Great story. I really loved your 1st story. This one really adds to it. Showing from the other side with Sylvia and David. 10000% continue this story line. You are quickly become one of my favorite authors here.

I just finished your story, and have to tell you that I loved it. I do hope that you continue writing in this genre because you story is very interesting plausible. Thank you

The best story I've ever read on this site. I came three times in a row

Your description of the sex is to be treasured. I was such a pleasure to read about making love and not just humping and getting off. This was real feelings and caring. I loved this.

Please continue this story. I really want to see where this goes, with both women. Well written, fantastic build ups to both stories. Talented writer, thank you so much.

Yap, realy good stories.

Just freaking wow! You had me leaking like a sieve. The hottest story I have read in many moons.

This piece is very well written. It has reached the literary heights of the great incest masters in this site like ASK80 or jtmalone70. You obviously have a writer's soul, storyteller. Congratulations. Please, keep delighting us with your sensual and well crafted stories.

One of the best stories of all time. Absolutely loved it. You should write more!

I felt your excitement and your thrills. It was a wonderful read. I hope that you were wet through the entire effort. And Thank You!!

Very well written. I am looking forward to your next story.

I need another one like now!!! This has to be one of the best short stories I’ve read in a while!!! Please continue the series I wanna see where this goes and ends with both moms!!!!

Love this story. Well done. Would love for this to continue. Thank you!

Excellent story. Please, please, please continue!!!

A bit anticlimactic after reading Amanda's story, but very well written. Loved the descriptions of emotion and romance. Looking forward to reading the next one, all new. 5/5

Did no one notice the CobraKai characters?

Without a doubt, this is the hottest story that’s ever been posted on the Literotica site. I don’t think I’ve ever been so hard!!

Fantastic story 5 *

Best...

Story...

Ever!!!!!

Sooooooooo hot!

I love this story!! Please, Please continue to write. Hope that there is another chapter in the works.

Excellent writing; not too many spelling errors; ot syntax mistakes. Keep up the good work! looking forward to the next part of this story...

Such a hot story. So well written. It made my pussy so wet. Your fantasy is my fantasy. I’ve struggled too.

A warm and loving story between mothers and sons exploring their attraction to each other. Of course you need to continue it.

Completely uninhibited..great sex scenes

Completely uninhibited and very well written

Incredible. This has inspired a lot of blasting ejaculations. Thank you. More please....

Very similar in tone and style to LindaT217... I wondernif the author is related?

Very hot, very good!

Fantastic story. The way the main character's thoughts and feelings were explored made it truly special for me.

I think this is a one and done. Well written

Amazing story! 5*

I love that the story focuses on the mother and son...not on a bad dad. I feel like stories get distracted when there is too much dad bashing in them. This one did state that the dad was bad, but didn't keep hammering on it. That's good because every mention of the dad is a downer, and distracts from the good feelings between mother and son.

I also love that this truly felt like a mother son story. Many such stories feel more like just any two people who are attracted to each other and then decide to act on it. Obviously this is fantasy, but there's a realistic feeling to it, which makes it more sexy.

For a 3rd story, if you want to keep these characters, you could have another mom/son move in next door. Then you could have Amanda and Sylvia help her into bed with her son. Like maybe the mother moved them there because she needed a change, due to her husband dying a few years previous, but she's also struggling with her attraction to her son. The son, while he sees that his mom is very sexy, hasn't allowed his mind to go in that direction, but when his mother is coaxed into exploring her fantasies by dressing sexier and becoming more affectionate, his mind starts crossing into that direction. Robbie and David encourage him to relax and enjoy having such a sexy mom being so affectionate, and maybe start testing her boundaries.

I like stories like that, and how Sylvia didn't overdo the encouragement, but with the next one, if you do something like what I described, the encouragement could be more direct. Sylvia and Amanda admitting they push the boundaries with their sons, but don't admit to the sexual part. Each step they admit they are doing what they are encouraging. First the exhibitionism, then the physical affection, and cuddling while watching a movie, then kissing, then sexual touching, etc... Finally admitting to their sexual relationships. Just a thought.

Good luck with the next story. Hope we don't have to wait as long for the 3rd one.

I loved this from front to back. Now off to read your earlier story.

Please resist the chorus of requests for a sequel. This perfect story stands alone. I do hope you write more, and suggest a slightly different theme I find exciting - the mother having sex with her son's peers. It's a completely different vibe.

Top 3 mother/son incest story I've had ever read ! The inner monologue of Sylvia was so intense, how she opened up step by step. If there is another part, i do really hope, you wont let him share his mother with that other guy.. That would totally ruin the romance part. 5/5

Great story to join the previous one. You're a great writer and would enjoy more stories or a continuation of this one.

Well written, and I think if I had a son, I would have done it. Is it really such a taboo? I think even it was a fantasy, it was well presented and some of the details are quite what I would expect from a young man.

Wonderful story! You have a way of transporting us into the head and emotions of the mother that is quite rare (due to, I’m sure, to your own situation and thoughts) in a short story- hell, in any type of fiction. I look forward to your next foray into fiction-dom (probably not a real word but it should be 🙂).

An absolutely fantastic story. Please, Melissa, give us a follow-up story to this one. I’m off to read your first story, about Amanda, and I look forward to it. But I look forward to seeing a sequel to this story also. And thanks for sharing.

5⭐️s. 10 if it were possible.

Feelings are described with an authenticity that rings true, as if the author has truly felt them, if only in her fantasy. Beautiful. I hope writing this has given her the catharsis she needed. I wonder if her son has ever given an indication that he has similar feelings for her

Loved it!

Whoa! Hot. Well written.good character development. 5*

I am male nearing 80. I have never felt a sexual desire for my mother but have always had an interest in enabling others who did, especially my girl friends who were brave enough to reveal this.

I gave both stories 5 because the descriptions of the forces crushing their resistance were so eloquently painted as "crossing an event horizon" and slipping inexorably into a vortex which stripped social values of meaning. Delightful stuff.

I do hope there are more episodes where the milfs test their attraction to each other. etc

Lass Lover.

I look at both sides of this coin. Is this a guy replacing his double dating sex romp with mothers being the “girlfriends”? Would two mothers have sex with their sons at the same time? One already had sex and coerced the other mother into taking her son? I read this twice and surmise if the sons were with the other mother, each mother will be sharing her son while enjoying a younger man.

It is not an easy decision for a mother to engage in a sexual relationship with her son, and this story has fully captured that mental struggle. Moving two steps forward, one step back. Making a bold move and then second guessing. As his mother and the "adult" in the relationship, she feels responsible for both their actions, and the guilt of having led her son down a "sinful" path weighs heavy on her. It was a wonderfully thoughtful gesture on his part when he assumed that burden on himself.

"Let go of all the responsibility." He slapped his cock head against my clit multiple times and I moaned. "Its on me, Mom.. Just let go.."

I can understand the attraction of these sons and single moms. If it's truly consensual, I do not judge, and wish them the best. Good writing, and hot. I hope writing this helped you, as you suggested. But I do have to judge trying to get your friend to do it too, so that you can feel better. Sorry, that's just plain fucked up and wrong, and calls all of it into question.

Why not have Sylvia and Amanda trade their sons, no incest but a lot of erotica. It would make for a better erotic fantasy story.

Phew, ended just shy of sharing. That would have ruined it for me. I just don't enjoy that in an incest story; doesn't fit the theme. Sylvia is a great mother - the best, really - and an amazing best friend. She knew what her friend really needed and went to great lengths to make it happen for her. I would like to see more of what happens but I fear another chapter would inevitably bring in son-swapping, which would just kill the story for me, so perhaps it's best to end things here.

Would be cool though if the sons knocked their moms up and they kept up these little get togethers with no sharing. Even better if Amanda ended up being even more into it than Sylvia and basically ends up constantly pregnant by her son, having falling completely and totally in love with him and wanting to give him everything he wants - his biggest desire (after his mother of course) being a large family. They could also move away so they can live together as man and wife and be in public together, go on a couples cruise, get married in a double wedding... So many possibilities.