by cranesgirl
...As you hit all the main points, and I've been involved in conversations very much like this one. Do continue on... 5 stars... Cheers! --- Josie
Way to go ... Nothing wrong with a confident beautiful woman whether she is a BBW or a slender gal as long as she knows how sexy she looks herself. What you did for the young lady in your story was right everybody deserves the right to be seen as the person that think and feel they are. So you go girl!!!
Thank you so much for your support. The next part is pending approval. I think this story crosses a number of categories. It's a romance that's gonna take time. So thanks to everyone who stays on board.
I want everything to be authentic so if I use a term or phrase that I shouldn't then please... Educate me!
Short, but a lot of story in that one little page. Thanks for sharing.
Christi
I guess Stephen felt the burn
great story, n ow if you make a part 2 it should have carol and raine reuniting like night and day
I was surprised by the abrupt ending—but then realized how well it worked. Thanks!
What a delicious opening trifle. I can't wait to read the next one!
xoxo,
Di