All Comments on 'Table for One'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

not bad for a one page chapter write another chapter 5 stars

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgover 8 years ago
Thank You...

...As you hit all the main points, and I've been involved in conversations very much like this one. Do continue on... 5 stars... Cheers! --- Josie

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Way to go ... Nothing wrong with a confident beautiful woman whether she is a BBW or a slender gal as long as she knows how sexy she looks herself. What you did for the young lady in your story was right everybody deserves the right to be seen as the person that think and feel they are. So you go girl!!!

cranesgirlcranesgirlover 8 years agoAuthor
Thankyou

Thank you so much for your support. The next part is pending approval. I think this story crosses a number of categories. It's a romance that's gonna take time. So thanks to everyone who stays on board.

I want everything to be authentic so if I use a term or phrase that I shouldn't then please... Educate me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Way to go

Short, but a lot of story in that one little page. Thanks for sharing.

Christi

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I guess Stephen felt the burn

great story, n ow if you make a part 2 it should have carol and raine reuniting like night and day

MuskratSamMuskratSamover 8 years ago
Very cool!

I was surprised by the abrupt ending—but then realized how well it worked. Thanks!

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
Magnificent

What a delicious opening trifle. I can't wait to read the next one!

xoxo,

Di

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