All Comments on 'Table for Two Ch. 03: Opening Salvo'

Ka-ching!

5

Definitely a story well told.

Saddletramp, yet another fantastic chapter and like the other chapters before the only downside is that they are not long enough haha. You are a fabulous wordsmith carry on what you're doing.

Thanks ST! Looking forward to more. Love your stuff! Thank-you again for your talent!

Loved this new episode, ST,...bring on the rest!

In a messed up way your stories are like comfort food. Or those old western and super hero serials. The good guy wins, bad guys lose, and the guy always ditches the girl.

I know there is a twist to come and looking forward to it. My only gripe is that you don't seem to have completed the story before posting other parts. What if you get hit by a car? (I know, selfish right) Anyway, still loving this one and again my plea is to get the next part published as soon as possible. Loving your work.

Excellent look forward to next installment...

5 stars

Mike dies everything right and everything goes his way, while his future ex-wife does everything wrong.

Her dad is wealthy, why make a pre nup in the event of adultery? Why not spousal abuse? A few bruises, a claim of psychological abuse and Mike's broke and in jail.

And any lawyer will tell you: until the divorce is finalized, don’t fuck around. She moves her lover in before the paperwork is filed, why the hell would she do that.

Then the whole sex scene, it was boring. She behaved as though she knew she was on camera. I mean, come on. Why does she want to get pregnant with another mans child before they were even a couple.

Sorry but this has more holes than Swiss Cheese.

Better story telling in this chapter. Great it only a story. As we all should know the real world never moves as fast as this . Also him calling the wives and sending out all he has taped seems way to soon. You giving those conspiring to get you time to adjust to the charges. But it’s your story !

Good story so far. Sucks 2 pages per chapter. But it's your story to post how you want . Would be better to have it all written out and post a chapter a day.

Dragging, so much unnecessary filler, why 2 pages weeks apart? 1*

Hi Saddle

I just want you to know that I appreciate your efforts here. You are one of the few remaining authors here that is consistent on the subject of infidelity. I do wish that in your style you would include more backstory and dialog on the cheatersd side. It just comes out as one dimensional sometimes and I would love to feel the tension that would come from hearing from "The Cheating bitch and Friends" Anyway keep up the good work and I hope your muse keeps sending you ideas..

Big fan of the Hitch hikers series! Dr. Neil DeGrasse Tyson has been quoted as saying that 42 is actually a constant in some field of astrophysics. Old Doug Adam's knew his stuff!

I mean what else do you give "the professor" himself ST, but 5 stars every time. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

As always, it is a pleasure to read your story. One of the few authors who firmly see "cheating" as a dealbreaker and let consequences arise from it. That's wonderful for my sense of justice. Thanks for that. 5*!

Interesting so far but we need more thanks u have a very creative mind

good read, don't take so long to get next chapter out.. Thanks

so far so good...

And it took you this long to crank out two pages that is mostly: Hows the coffee? Tastes like shit. Remember the coffee commercial with the little midget? Yeah, those were the days. Any more news on the people who are trying to kill me? Well, so far its looks like they have not succeeded, but we're still checking. I think I still have a pulse. Hard to tell, when they kill you so slowly, one useless irrelevant word at a time. Yeah, I know what you mean. Me too. How's the coffee?

But thanks for the effort.

Ok, the train hasn't gone off the rails yet, but it's sure spinning its wheels in one place, trying to gain traction. Next episode, we'll be showing the video to the neighbors, the town council, all the local TV networks......

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First welcome back!!! Hope life does settle down for you. Love the way you have dovetailed this story into past tales, I really like it. Waiting to see what is next!

If the only complaint I can make is that I have to wait between chapters, then you have done a great job drawing us into the world. Always appreciate seeing your name pop up in the new stories section. Also great shout out to Douglas Adams!

Another great installment. Looking forward to the rest of the story as Paul Harvey use to say.

"I suppose I could've done a background check before we got married.

Love may be blind but don't be stupid and rely on what someone tells you alone. If you're at the point of marrying someone have a full background check run on them. Get the full works.... Previous alias, financials, criminal and civil including previous marriages and divorces. If your relationship has developed normally then by the time you're both thinking about committing to marriage they should have told you everything from their past you should know in order to have a satisfying relationship together. If they've been hiding stuff from you, especially critical information then that should signal some red flags about the relationship.

St: Always leaving us wanting more. 5 Star effort!

Great story as always. Looking forward to the ending.

well written as always

Frankly, I am pissed at myself. I started this series because of the author. IT Made me change, bvriefly, my policy, which is to ignore new series until later on, when they are completed. Instead, I get episodes where there is no context, except for a couple paragraphs from the prior episode. The fact is tha, like most readers I expect, I read a likely 30-40 or more stories between episodes, so unlike what the auther apparently expects, I am not dwrelling on "Okay I read this, now I anxioulsy await the next episode while retaining every aspect of what has transpired to date." IT's not like that. I am trapped into awaiting new episodes now, even without recalling all the details so far.

Why not include a summary to bring us up to date before the new episode, at least>? I curse myself for starting this series and it will not happen again.

AWESOME!! PLEASE PLEASE post next chapter asap

Recurring theme

As is the case in most of your stories, very well thought out and scripted.

I love your story telling ability. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

I'm enjoying this story

I understand life doesn't conform to our wishes but thanks for what you are able to accomplish. I too hate the 2 page serial scenario but do, like I said, understand. You also have the unique ability to tie almost all of your characters into different stories. I love that since I've read almost all your stories. Good health to you and yours and I'll keep reading if you keep writing. Thanks!

Mr SaddleTramp, another Great Story. 5 stars. You are one of the best writers on Literotica. Thank You for your consistant hard work and excellent Stories. Thanks!

Normally really enjoy your stories, but this feels needlessly drug out. Lots of filler and repeating previous info. Hoping it gets better as it goes.

Good Saddletramp Story Again. I appreciate your story telling much more that the rest on Literotica. There are a couplle close.

Loving this story! Please don’t make us wait too long on the next chapter! I’m dying here!

Great story keep the plot going can hardly wait to read more

As I said after the earlier chapters, I don't normally like the super secret government agency stories, but I am enjoying this one a lot!

Another great installment! Looking forward to the rest!

As always, you r a master story teller

This is getting tedious. The gaps between installments makes it difficult to keep track of the names and occupations of people. If this were the only story I was reading it probably wouldn't be so bad, but I do read other tales. I've been on the lookout for the continuations of this story, but I'm not sure I care how this ends. ln the past I've read multiple chapter stories one right after the other when all have been posted and that works much better for me. The whole story is too mechanical and our hero can do no wrong and he's a bit boring. for what we have I've rated it 3*, but perhaps that's generous.

Love it!

No complaints from me!

Waiting on the next part!!!

Dragging out a story that should be much shorter

Excellent and can't wait for the next chapter! 5 BIG AND FAT SUPER NOVA STARS!

Boring as hell

Only complaint is that the chapters are too short, and the time between postings is too long.

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OK….that was TWO complaints 😱

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5 easy *****

All of this legal shit is fun to read and gets the assholes taken care of most times. Still, just kill the bastards and move on the word would get out or you would run out of assholes. Either way problem solved. Waiting on the legal process to handle it takes to long and allows these parasites to grow. Burn them where you find them and quit wasting time and effort to handle them with kid gloves.

Glad to see you back. Fun to read. Thank you

5 stars

ST is always an interesting read. There are always evil people doing evil things and we always have a hero to take the bad guys down. Damn, I wish real life was like that. Thanks for sharing, looking forward to the next installment.

Something I expect when it is from Saddletramp1956!!!! As always, anxious to see what is happening next!

It is a good story, but it did seem to drag on in spots.

Great writing/writer!

Thanks for making me feel old. Since I read all 4 books of the trilogy by Douglas Adams in college (and the movies came after that), referring to that as an “old movie” cinches my place in the age hierarchy.

Intriguing to say the least!!! Keep working on them.... I want to see how this plays out.. Good Job!!!

Thanks for this excellent story... Getting better and better. Love the twisting, weaving plotlines, the supporting characters and the way they interact with the plot. Your writing "voice" is still one of best around, and that includes many published, well-known authors. Your style is so easy to ready, and the resulting story reads very "Goldilocks" in nature: everything is included in just the riiiight blend! Damn Near Perfect!! 5+++++++++/5!!!

I've not enjoyed one series of yours, the thing on the plant. Nothing wrong with it, just not my cup of tea.

EVERYTHING THING ELSE I've loved!

Can't wait for the next Chapter!

Some Annie sent me this Feedback: "What happened? no comment today? You didn't like the mirror I put in front of your ugly southerner faces? One, I've commented five times today, without an ID or a title, I have NO idea what this moron is talking about. Two, I'm a true blue Yankee.

Enjoying this growing story. Thanks for your writing.

From the old movie? 42…

How dare you disgrace Douglas Adams like that…. He was a great writer, and you steal his work by referencing a mediocre movie that he had nothing to do with

Looking good, ST!

Intriguing plot and sub-plots amidst a gut-wrenching storyline. Good to have old friends to lean on for moral and legal/protective actions. Anyone else, except the MC with his background, would have just been smoked and probably in a pine box before they knew what was happening to them.

The MC's emotional level seems to be underplayed here. I would have thought he needed more internal dialogue or actions to express - some rage. Toss a few of her things down the stairs for the truckers to carry out - or set some of her finest clothing on a bar-b-que and watch them go up in smoke with a smirky sense of justice. You did mention he spoke to the movers about using the pictures for a fire. You could have that as a scene with some of that rage going on. Then that's just me thinking. ;-)

This story is so ridiculous that it is fun to read and to laugh at all the absurdities presented.

AWESOME cant wait for the next part. Pls kno ur hard work is enjoyed and appreciated.

WTF it's all been commented on! Great will sufice!

So bad. Same story, different title

My only comment is that ALL detractors should just quit reading if they don't like the story and move on to something else. It's free and the author can tell the tale the way he wants.

Many more people are enjoying it than the few A**holes who crap on everything. Get a life

So looking forward to more. Thank you for a great story

5/5

Saddletramp is building towards another great finish as always. No one else is even close to writing a multi part story that can hold your interest like ST. Always a fun romp.

He should try to help Cartwrigt's other husband victims

This cannot be the end. There has to be a 'coming to Jesus meeting' to make a proper ending. Great story, by the way. Thanks for all your effort, Saddletramp.

FTDS

Same story, different name. This world you like to talk about, go i to it and don't come back.

I find these spy type stories a boor. I have maybe two or three people who i could call in the middle of the night for an emergency favor. This guy knows everybody and hints at mad skills. Unbelievable and moving too slow.

Not Bad~Not Bad at all! 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟😁

These stories are hilarious. SCaRy WoMeN tRYING tO kILL WiMPy LitTLe MeN! Hahaha.

RE: FTDS: It's obviously a chapter story. While I would like to know how many chapters, it will be finished when it's finished.

Oh, come on. Two pages???

give 'em hell!!

Loved it. Can't wait till the next chapter comes out. You have always been one of my favorite authors, even back when I read one of your first stories. Need tto file your stories quicker (joking, I think). Looking forward to what will happen next. Thank you!!!

The Ultimate Question, from The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, is "What is the meaning of Life, the Universe, and Everything?" Love has nothing to do with it. Although I suppose you can't just use the original, because then it wouldn't really fit the story. Waiting for the next chapter.

10 stars! Samantha and her co-conspirators, hopefully pay a huge price, and their organization comes to an end!

stupid...

Intriguing , exciting and entertaining . Your ability to produce stories that consistently fit those parameters must be taxing on a person ? Based on the comments and followers you’ve acquired It seems the mass majority ,(me included), consider your work above average . Isn’t it hard to consistently perform at that high of a level ? When a band puts out an album and nearly every song on it ends up on a greatest hits album later on , I would think it would be a hard act to follow up on even though your merely following yourself , but alas you’ve set the bar too high!

Very Good can't wait too see what else Ms. Cartwright has been up to.

I am really enjoying the series. I don't normally read series, but this is very well written.

Pretty good science fiction.

This part of the story didn't add to much cause we got the recordings of their plot last time. We need a little more suspense and excitement.

Please don’t take too long on the next chapter.

Well, another brilliant chapter about a revenge minded husband. It is nice to know so many people in high places that can help one out. It is easy to really hate someone that goes to such lengths to try to destroy someone else. In many such stories the victim is such a weak-willed person that it is hard to get on their side. In some cases there is a belief that the person making the accusations is manipulated by someone else. In this case, it looks like Sam is being coerced by Alice Cartwright. Nicely written and can't wait to read the next few chapters of this story.

Worth the wait, looking forward to the next part.

I thought this was a 3 part story? This is the 3rd part yet hasn't really gone anywhere.. when do we hear from the slut and her cohorts? The story and writing was good, don't get me wrong. But if I'm told a story us 3 parts, I expect 3 parts. This is being dragged out for some weird reason .. but it's really not adding much. It just felt like it was just repeating chapter 2.

Great story thus far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

As always, great writing.

G

To the anonymous 2 posts below... Nowhere has SD said this was a three part story. Where did you get that idea from as it's nowhere in his intros to these chapters?

Excellent story, well written. Can't wait till the next chapter. Gets 5 stars vote from me. Well done.

Said it before and I will say it again. Saddletramp is one of the best authors on Literotica. Personal opinion is he is in the top 3.

Great story. Love it. AAAAAA+++++

*****Great follow-up great storyline, and a great read. Thanks for sharing.