by JT_Stone
Why change the mothers and sons names ? Hope you keep the names as Nancy and Josh now, or it could end up a bit confusing. That said, this as the makings of a good sexy story.
i loved it, i want more of this so hot and really well done , sounds real
Hot story. well paced and nicely imagined. Ignore the detractors keep writing. Please edit for continuity. 5 star!
Are you ever going to write more of this, or, are we just hung out to dry...
This author has done a good job of starting this potential series. However, obviously he/she has no intention of developing it. Hopefully the author will let another person develop and finish this well written story. For what it is worth, this initial entry is a 5 star story.