All Comments on 'Tag Along'

It was an okay story but you're clearly capable of better

It was a different kind of story, that's for sure. One thing I thought was weird was the use of the phrase 'then we mated,' just seemed a little incongrous to the story.

Not that writing a different sort of story is wrong, bad or disagreeable, but this is a strange little story. And, not just because it's coming from you, in that it doesn't read like any of your other stories that I recall. Two major themes—the brother-sister romantic relationship, and the two assaults on Sandy, seem completely disconnected from each other. If you intended for there to be a connection between those themes, I don't see it.

Well written, despite its strangeness.

i cant believe i just read that abt the 'tubes'. u cant b that dumb as smart as u are. u still believe that crap abt birth defects they made up to prevent u diong what u did? i'm a dr. u coulda got me over to give u two a kid. good read anyway. thanks

When I see a new posting by you I anticipate a well written story, a good story line and a typical (of you) writing style. You didn't touch all the bases. But it was well written.

This is a new direction from you by a bit -

I agree that the violence seemed a bit disconnected from the meat of the storyline, maybe it was too short to develop the tie in?

You also did not develop the expected philosophy of how love develops that you so careful craft in most of your family stories, and no joining but mating (animal lover concept and all it seemed).

If this is all deliberate it suggests a new direction for you which is fine - if not just makes one wonder, I still enjoy they way you write and think in you storie.

A lot to tell in a short story, but I could use my imagination to fill in what was not there. I thought it realistic though, lots of little Sisters fall in love with their big brothers. I know that my Daughters and Sisters idolized me and my life experiences. And yes, I was sexually attracted to my Sisters when we were younger. I think that is natural too. Never went any further as I, like my family was highly brainwashed by Southern Protesants back then.

I have read enough history to know that incest and love of family members was highly prevalent in other civilizations since the cave. In this day and age I don't see the problems that once existed. You do not need to have children to love one another. Your Poly lifestyles make too much sense for this day and age. Maybe in the future when mankind grows up and just tries to love each other. Funny, it has taken me over 60 years to know this as it has you I would surmise. Although I did read similar stories 40-50 years ago.

Great story, thank you for sharing and good luck to all those who can identify with it, cheers!

I give you 5 Stars. Gracias por las historias. Les deseo Feliz Navidad y Feliz Año Nuevo.

Thanks for sharing.

That really sucked what were you thinking if you were gonna sterilize her why did you even bother writing the story at all.you did fine otherwise.

Unless there was a reason lot listed, they could have had children safely. you are a fantastic story teller.

Ed Grocott

Not much of this made sense? You should of built up more to why brandy n bud would rape her. Wouldn't she have called her brother saying she was going to dinner with brandy if they call all the time? The whole scene before the tape murder is confusing talking bout what she did before being raped again? How did they even find her camping out in the middle of nowhere? So many more ?s about the whole story. Kinda would have been a good story idea if written better but def not my cup of tea

rather dumb in so many ways