All Comments on 'Take Me; I'm Yours'

Excellent stuff, hardly a word wasted...one I will enjoy reading again,

Your entire story had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what was going to happen next. please keep writing

I enjoyed this story very much. I'm just waiting for my husband to get home so we can recreate it! Good job!

A well-written, "Hot" story...what else would I expect from you?...and you even worked Monty Python into it...what's not to like?

the spice to the pot! Your writing is wasted in this category, by that I mean not enough people are getting to see it.

Pls come over to loving wives and write some more. continue your "reception" story, or not. A story like this (you have to have a wife though, not a random internet hookup) will generate over 100 comments, from some of the best writer's on the planet. It is staggering that this only has 4 piddly comments after 6 yrs.

These last two stories are going to make me investigate the rest of your portfolio. Thx for your efforts.