by Boo96
Jesus this story is picking up steam and getting better and better.
Great chapters.
5⭐️
I like how it is heating up with Emily. I still think each new installment is to long. At ieast the writing is good.
I was glad you focused a bit more this time with moving the plot along. It does seem like I get whiplash from the story at times with the Emily is, Emily is out, dialogue. 5*
Love the scene dressing Chrissie and fantasy of dressing Emily. Hopefully Tom will get to dress both for the same event. Story lengthy is fine. Emily's point of view would be nice as well. 5 Stars
Im happy with this new emily dynamic. I love her character. The story is getting hotter. Please hurry with the next part.
5/5
We all know the Em and Tom will get together. I can even see Tom making both women pregnant at around the same time. Now that would be very cool.