All Comments on 'Take Me, Tom Pt. 46-51'

by Boo96

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
MiddlesonMiddlesonabout 2 years ago

Jesus this story is picking up steam and getting better and better.

Great chapters.

5⭐️

DAWG8265DAWG8265about 2 years ago

Excellent. Awaiting the next installment(s)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I like how it is heating up with Emily. I still think each new installment is to long. At ieast the writing is good.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 2 years ago

I was glad you focused a bit more this time with moving the plot along. It does seem like I get whiplash from the story at times with the Emily is, Emily is out, dialogue. 5*

Cobbsweb69Cobbsweb69about 2 years ago

Love the scene dressing Chrissie and fantasy of dressing Emily. Hopefully Tom will get to dress both for the same event. Story lengthy is fine. Emily's point of view would be nice as well. 5 Stars

MrdinkyMrdinkyabout 2 years ago

Im happy with this new emily dynamic. I love her character. The story is getting hotter. Please hurry with the next part.

5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

We all know the Em and Tom will get together. I can even see Tom making both women pregnant at around the same time. Now that would be very cool.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userBoo96@Boo96
Photography, good whiskey ( just a wee dram, mind you) and erotica! I simply love femininity in all its forms. I tend to veer towards the incest but when the mood strikes, well... Extremely curious! Would love to correspond with like-minded souls.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES