All Comments on 'Take Two'

So full of sentiment and tenderness. I loved it. And just about the right amount of kink too! That first phone call still has me tingling.

;)

Amazing depth of emotion in this story. I loved it from beginning to end.

Once again you have written a story with emotion, depth, and some really hot sex! Of course what else do we expect from the great Colleen Thomas.

I didn't expect anything less than spectacular from you but DAMN! Another pair of perfectly good silk panties ruined.

one of the best if not the best on literotica

That was such an erotic and arousing story I got so turned on and wet.

Thank you

Love Jenny

jennyevans73@yahoo.com

This was crazy sexy! I wanted to read the whole thing and had to hold off on my orgasm many times - by the time I got to the end I was so wet my orgasm was twice as intense. Thank you!

Colly, this is one of the best story's on Lit. Absolutly incredible. Great characters, great story, I loved it.

DONE WITH AMAZING CLASS. YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF IT!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was by all means very well written and done in a very loving and tasteful manner. There is something to be said for someone who can write a story in this fashion.

Any chance of a sequel to it?

You realy know how to write a Sexy story , Made My panties wet...

You are SO professional. You're characters are so real. I wish I was one of them. Great sex is great sex but you can bring such feeling and genuine love into the picture. It's so exciting. Not necessarily this story, but in many, you can give a reader hope that real love may find them. At the least, you can make it hard to get a good night's sleep!

Please never give up writing!

By the way, you're story was a 10,000 on the 1-5 scale as usual. Very Warm Regards

is absolutely correct. You could probably make a load of money if you marketed your work. You really are a wonderfully talented writer. I look up to you, lol, oh Goddess of the Erotica tale;)

maria2394

When you think of all the poor Heathers out there under the thumb of asshole Jimbos, it just makes you wish there were more incredible Mais. I know this is fantasy and the real world isn't so kind, but it was a great story of true love and emancipation (sp). Great job Colleen.

Look, you write better than many other writers in this network. I agree with a comment lower down that you should publish, even if it is e-publishing, to as wide an audience as possible. Your capacity to build character, emotion and great sex is amazing. There seems to be a theme in your work about healing damaged souls and that is so endearing. I know it can be a plot device, but sense there is some personal experience or observations of others' experiences that gives such depth to your work. Well done. As I write so I learn and from you I am learning a lot.

Oh my god, so great. So very very great...

I can't even tell you how much i love this story... your amazing :)

Awesome. I read a lot. Not just literotica but a lot of novels and this story was excellent. Keep up the good work.

The best story of all time. I have never enjoyed a story this much before. This story got me WET. So hot. Such a great ending. Perfect.

seduction at it's very very best! Bringing out the beauty of love that can really only exist between two women. As a male I can only envy such passion and love and lust. One almost wants to be feminised to take one of the roles!!!!!

made me cum constantly. Great storyline. Damn those abusive prick husbands-nice to see the girl get the girl!

Hello,

When I first read this a few years back, I had hoped Colleen would develop the story into a full-length novel.

When I heard she had died I was sad and sentimental.

She was a wonderful writer.

May she rest in peace.

Hello Again,

I agree on the comment about an Anthology: It would be a fitting Memorial and Tribute to her.

R.I.P.

Colleen is the best erotica writer. A real pantie waster! Got me so wet that it even left a damp spot on the chair I was sitting.

Was a really good read got me some what wet xx

Colleen, Thank you for an absolutly, mesmerizing love story!

I just want to let u know, that i'm a big fan of your work! Whenever, i see your name attached to a story...i know to open it up and i'm sure not to be dissapointed!! I long for your writing like a fish longs for water!!!

Fabulous story - extremely arousing! Such a well written piece - I look forward to perusing your other stories!

Many thanks

Whenever i feel the need for something well written, erotic, romantic, and thoughtful, I always go for one of collen's many stories. I'm just so thankful for her and even though she is gone from this world, i hope she realizes the amazing effect she has on us readers. Thanks collen thomas. RIP

I can't honestly say how many times I've read this story and gotten off to it, it's simply fantastic and inspires me to write stories of my own.

That was frickin awesome !

Beautyful an mooving

A CEO's PA would have to have nicer clothes, it goes with the job.

Awesome (:

A wonderful story, thank you!

L

I love this story. was thinking if we can see more until I saw other comments.

How did you know she's gone???!!!!

this is one of the best story's I have read on the website, this is the reason I read these storys

What a wonderful story, so hot and erotic but also filled with such love.

A heart warming story. Well written with a good flow and some hot scenes.

Someone is butt-hurt in the comments.

Seriously who gives a fukc if the lead has small titties.

(can't believe I'm typing this nonsense lol)

I noticed that you didn't have the gumption to put a name to your lame ass comment.

CT was consistently the highest "scorer" for all of her stories on this site during her sadly shortened life.

IF you are a writer of erotic fiction, you could only dream about achieving what Colleen did.

Its so sad that you choose to denigrate such a talented and prolific writer over something as stupid as the size of a woman in a story`s breasts.

RIP C.T., gone but never forgotten.

I could do without the roofying, and I agree that a PA would be required to have decent clothes especially if she was to accompany her boss to conferences. But other than that, I enjoyed it. Very cute

Big fat high five!! Just had to smile when i finished this and was hot too!! 😉

Wow great… thank you so much

As a Male like so many others we are fascinated by two Women getting it on together, often one is submissive being Dominated for little more than to satisfy lust.

This wonderfully written story is what I regard as TRUE SEDUCTION a Powerful Woman diplaying a loving tenderness to achieve Her Desire! 5 stars +

Brilliant.Couldn't stop reading.Five stars for sure.

Loved the story all over again.

Mia also saw that she was beginning to loose those fears.

This should be LOSE those fears

Good story though!!!

Ime Udoka should have worked here.

Great story, had doubts about Mia's attention to Heather and the seduction technique but it was not absolute domination and it worked exceptionally well.

That's really excelent, I just wished it was longer..

Read this a couple years ago. The second time was sweeter, as one's perspective shifts. This was one of the sweetest, yet deeply passionate, seductions carried out with delicacy and respect.

Have reread it and still love this story so much! Too bad you stopped writing!

but you are too valuable for me to loose you for any period of time. I think the word you are looking for is LOSE

Jimbo and her dad are assholes! Pardon my French. I'm glad the bust came about.

FYI- Her dad is an asshole for loving Jimbo and he should also spend time in jail. He is totally unsympathetic.

Jimbo is a fine fitting name closed to bimbo and Heathers father is next to him measuring the brains ….. beating women or a woman, those perverts are sick, but in the end its the most legally drug we use Alcohol

Mias tricky plot worked out and a bright future is coming up ….. fabulous

💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨☘️🌸

Shouldn't this been posted under lesbian story?

Sorry my bad, it is under lesbian and a fine lesbian story it is. lol