All Comments on 'Taken as a Slave Ch. 02'

It's a requirement.

This could be a good story but all the spelling errors and atrocious grammar made it a complete loss!

Good story ignore the idiots.....

What a great story loved the second part, when can we have more......

I can totally see myself in that place. Great story! Please don't let it end here, I need to know what happens next!

great story wish i was in that position heaven please lets have more

OMG I absolutely adore this story and sooooo want some more to it ,please?

I wish it were me and Please make it sooner than later...Where do I sign on the dotted line ,pretty please ,with ruby-red-lipsticked-mouth yearning!!

great story; please continue

Fantastic story,I wish I was in his place.Please,please continue the tale.I love it

When there will be a continuation?

your writing style is wonderful, thank you very much for your effort.

i love your story !

I love the way you tell the story but I think you should work a little harder on the grammar and the spelling... Other then the things that you messed up on I loved it I think you have a good chance at making money doing this if you fix them.

Why do all the good stories say 'to continue' and then don't?? I would love to have been Carol. Wow, this makes me wet every time I read it. Please give us more!!!!!!

Please write some more. Wish I could be blackmailed like this poor guy is.

This story was real good. My dick was hard from beginning to end! It was all I could do not to play with myself.

Very sexy 2 Part story...I wish I could be part of this story...This lucky sissy gets fucked and has lots of cocks to suck and as a bonus he gets to cum and eat his own dick juice...

please write more

I enjoyed it, keep writing.

Nice start to a long term relationship that your not able to control . Chapter three please

Well - paced and filthy! Got me going.