All Comments on 'Taken By Surprise!'

I found it entirely enjoyable. I liked the style, I loved the delicate way you used language. I was completely charmed. Write more stories please.

"This she knew was just the start and she looked forward to seeing this craziness through to its very end." I see this final sentence as promise that I urge you to keep.

Only a few slip ups in tense, going from 'she' to 'I' at one point in the narrative portions of the story. But it is enchanting --- to be honest, though, now that I think about it, her dropping to her knees to unzip his pants seems rather forward and out of character for the 'shy' girl. Perhaps, it would have been more in keeping with their personalities if he had made the first move... Overall, it was a great tale.

Yummy!