Taken Ch. 02

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"Uncle, when is Auntie Skye going to have babies?" asked Becky. He almost choked on his stew; it was his turn to turn a dark red.

"When God blesses them with one dummy," announced Caine with a mouthful of food.

"Caine, don't talk to your sister like that and eat all your food before talking," chastised the old woman. Cane frowned.

"Sorry Nanny," he apologized.

"Georgie mentioned a few hiccups?" Clyde glared at his older brother and looked to his mother.

"Skye attempted a few escapes but together we handled it."

"I handled it, with no help from you," argued Georgie.

"We got her here and didn't get in trouble," snapped Clyde. My blood boiled the way they were referring to me like I was an item, an object and not a person. I could feel my hands as they curled into fists and I studied the table. It was a few seconds between the thought entering my head and me following through. I picked up the butter knife and with all my strength I stabbed it through his hand. Blood immediately pooled while pinning his hand down to the wood. A few children screamed while others started to cry. Their mothers attempted to shield them and Clyde cried out, swearing as he pulled the knife out in one quick thrust, giving an arc of blood and spraying Georgie who sat across from him.

The old woman handed him a towel to stop the bleeding. Georgie directed his family out of the dining room, grabbing the baby from the high chair.

"My name isn't Skye, I am Lyndsay and you all are crazy brainwashed idiots," I shouted as I breathed heavily. I barely saw his fist until it connected with my jaw. I landed on my butt crying out at the new pain.

"You need to handle her brother," Georgie yelled, he was furious.

"I WILL," Clyde shouted back.

"Christopher, its time you learn about lashings. Grab Skye and take her out to the barn, I'll be right out." Christopher grabbed both my biceps and led me out the back door, I was still breathing heavily, almost transfixed by what I had done. I hadn't even thought twice, and in front of all the children. What was I turning into?

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love it!

I love the start of this story and the storyline. I really like the characterization of the family and the three brothers and cannot wait to see more from them, the crazy that they give off is extremely interesting. This story is very intriguing and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Keep going please!

Another great chapter! Please continue writing and post the next chapter up soon. I didn't like that Christopher get to have Skye first. Since she's Clyde's first wife and how the story so far about him helping her shower and that she's still a virgin, it's only fair that Clyde gets to "break her in" first and then let his other brothers have a turn with her. Perhaps you can make Clyde change his mind when you write the next chapter? Like maybe it's a retaliation to her stabbing him on his hand? Lol

Anyway you're doing a great job! Look forward to read the next post :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I agree with anonymous on how this story is going to go, but if its not then please prove us wrong and write the story different than any other story like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Lol

I dont like that she stabbed Clyde. Don't get me wrong....I just wish it was George as he posts the most threat as to her getting free. Chris had taken a shine to her... Anyone see him killing the others to get Lyndsay/Skye?

P.S. This is nothing like "The Last Tritan"....so shut up. Don't lime the story? Fine....I can't say don't read it because you need to read it in order to not like it but after that shut up. Go rub one out, or in ;) and on to the next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Great start but for once I wouldn't mind a happy ending for the captive, haven't seen one yet!?

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