All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 03'

This was one hell of an interesting chapter, you did a fantastic job on laying down a good foundation. I love it! I love her inner spirit, she isn't going to go down fighting or ignore common sense when it comes to that. I love that - too many of these nonhuman heroine's give in too quickly. If I was kidnapped, I would be putting up a fight too LOL!!!

lol...I agree with lostchicken, it is refreshing to read a woman with a backbone and common sense especially in this case when so many stories the woman just give up into a man like a drop in the hat with very little sense of self preservation and right/wrong. Both of the characters are interesting and developed I so can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work and enjoy your holidays

It was a nice surprize to see this chapter posted up as I kept looking for the next installment. I have to add this did not disapoint as you kept the pace nicely and the story keeps me wanting more..

Keep up the good work.

oh is he in for the ride of his life. she may feel the attraction but she won't just give in, can't wait for the next chapter =)

Take me with your aggresiveness

I love a headstrong female lead. I guess I have a new fave.

Fatality

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment. Excellent story!

It's a damn good story, can't wait for more!

I absolutely, positively am loving this story, please continue and do not give up.

Great stuff. Gabriel is getting impatient. Watch out Alicia here comes the wolf..lol

So glad to see this story back. I can't wait for the next chapter.

This story is interesting, I hope you don't stay away so long next time.

Welcome Back!

I am hoping you maintain the battle for dominance between these two.... Please don't leave us out here to speculate for to long!

Grabs a fan, this story is getting hot!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I guess that she is part were as well. Looking forward to the next update in January 2011.

I'm loving this story! Please keep the updates coming more frequently please!!!

want to check back for the next chapter, i hope it will be here soon!

Awesome! Please hurry with the next chapters!

really great story. can't wait for more. Wondering what Michael and his father will do to keep them apart and why it seemed like they knew of Alicia. He found the girl is what Michael said...sounds like they knew of her. I also wonder why he won't try explaining things to her. But I get the'd think he's crazy. But afterall, he could prove it by shifting in front of her. Well, I look forward to seeing where it goes. Hoping for a new chapter soon.

Please hurry with the next chapter as this story has me hooked.

Happy New Year

OMG I so hate you for that cliffhanger. Please have the next chapter up soon...I can't wait! XD

What is the secret w/ Alicia? Not only Gabriel's brother and father know, but Kristen whispered something about it "being hard to be back". You are teasing us and that's great. I can't wait to see what happens next so please write quickly.

i am so enjoying this interracial were love story. please post more chapters soon. have a wonderful new year!

I love this story. It is so well written and i like the added mystrey. Your charecters are developing nicely and there is a good pace to the story. Really looking forward to the next update.

Keep Writing I Love This Series, Great Writing.

I so want an update now because that cliffhanger was evil. Pure evil. The story is progressing fantastically, update soon.

im obsessed with this story now please write more i beg of you its one of the best well written & attention grabbing stories ive seen so far on here

please dont stop with this cliff-hanger

This is hot! The characters are strong. The plot is good. I want more please update soon.

And you cut it off right before the good part. PLLEEEAAASSSEEEE continue at least with the next scene. Pretty Please.

With sugar on top.

:)

This is finger lickin good...I need you to finish this!!

Please, please, please finish this story

I am and have been for a while now been waiting like a good little girl for the next chapters, but I am running out of patience already. Let's see how she handles his wolf.

Please we want more chapters.

Would love to see this continued!

im anxious grhjhrgvjhegjkgbkj

i like this story please write more!!!!!!!

I’ve been getting a lot of emails about the next chapter and I wanted to let everyone know that I haven’t forgotten about Taken. Four is being edited and I was finish with chapter five but decided to add another scene at the end of the chapter; once that done I’ll be sending it off to editing.

Thanks for all the comments and I’ll update you guys if anything else changes

...can't wait to read chapters four and five. Your protagonists are appealing and the plot already intrigues me.

Passion, pride, tension, lust, will power. Great chapter.

cant wait to read the next chapters please finish

He is just so mouthwatering in his desire for her. It is palpable how much these characters want each other. His is instinctual and draws her like pheromones on subliminal levels. Like males in the wild looking for mates.

There are some structure issues with your story but I love your characters and the plot line enough to over look that.

I don't care that this is a non human story about werewolves...and that Weres are possive....KIDNAP will never be erotic...he took her from a cinderella type situation only to force her to live with him?...mate or not that's creepy and means this should be in the Nonconsent/Reluctantance section...it wouldve been a good story if you didn't have him KIDNAP her...

PLz ignore all pointless comments....ur work is awesome and doesn't have any flaws in my opinion....this is ur story sooo own it!... dnt let no school teachers stop you from doing you!

Alicia should be mad at the family that "sold" her to the Alpha. Her anger with Gabriel is because he snatched her. So innocent there is much she can't see. This story has evolved well so far.The Council and pack are

pushing him to go against his wolf and there will be consequences, but for whom is the question.

This story tries to make kidnapping acceptable