All Comments on 'Taken In The Shower Ch. 02'

very well told

Well done, hot, sensual erotic, just as these stories should be.

Even though Mel raped her at first, it is quite evident that she loved it. It also is evident that Mel loves his sister very much. They would make a good couple, and have the feelings towards each other that would carry them past the rough times on to the good times of love and sharing their bodies with each other. Both brothers should treat her with the most respect and care for her as their most special woman. More than just a husband to his wife, they should worship her for the perfect woman she is.

Keep up the good work !!

Almost beautiful in its execution

Thank you to everyone who left such wonderful comments on this story. It means a great deal to me that this second chapter was received so well. I've been gone for a while, I know, due to personal reasons and familial obligations, but I plan to continue this story after reading how much you all liked it. It also means I will be changing my original direction, since I don't want to disappoint any of my fans. So, thank you again for the feedback; it saved the story. ^.-

I was cautiously curious about the 'forced' aspect. I won't read ch 1 again, but this one... I came twice through the first reading. Beautiful!

well done and hot.....you must carry on with this story..so many ways to go.....a 5star plus

With both of her brothers fucking the shit out of her and unloading their heavy brotherly balls up her cute little cunt, this lucky girl's going to have her little twat brother-sperm-clogged for sure.

That was so hot id like another chapter

The Next chapter should include a threesome

Well shit! This was even better than chapter 1. Loved the passion, the languid fucking. The love.

Need a 3rd chapter though. Maybe a threesome with the 3 siblings together. Yum