by furrybert
Oh you're back, sweet Jesus don't leave again! Please! I'll read like..your grocery list and like it!
Welcome back!! And please don't ever go away!
Hunted is one of my absolute favourites, for years I've just been reading it over and over - especially the end when Sasha finally tracks down Suzanne.. so good!
Thanks for coming back, I really enjoyed reading this - it's already amazing after just one chapter!
I would read your grocery list too! Hunted is my favorite. Please keep writing.
She called the police, went to the hospital for a rape kit and sent his ass to prison for 18 to 20 years wherein he became Bubba's Butt Buddy. You think she remained silent? You're truly delusional. Ridiculous, unbelievable ending.
Are you lost?
You read all the way to the end of a non consent story and then decided to complain?
Fairytale endings are not all that common here, and definitely not with this author.
Ughh. Absolutely perfect - you've got the gift! Is this going to be a multi-parter? Because it's awesome and I sure would like it to be!
So happy to see you still writing!
Hunted was the first story I ever read on here.
And this one is just perfect too.
I was reading this and loving Ben's scorching-hot dirty talk (it's hard to find good dirty talk for some reason). Then I saw your name and actually said, "Holy shit!" out loud and a couple "Oh my Gods." I have to admit there were a few moments of extreme fangirling before I could start reading again. So excited to see a new story!
This it's not just top quality dubcon smut (which it definitely is) but nice overall writing as well. Ben violates Lily in a way that lets the reader (and Lily) enjoy it without it losing any that noncon edge. Damn. Well done. And hot as fuck.
Does this mean you might be posting again? Be prepared. You're about to be inundated with welcome back messages from happy fans and well-deserved praise from old and new readers.
I was thrilled to see you are submitting again! Hunted was the very first Lit submission I ever read--and this new one is every bit as good. I hope there are more to come!
So hot! And I echo the other's sentiments with a very excited "welcome back"! Hunted is one of my absolute favorites and I just happened to pop over today to read it and saw this new post and couldn't believe it after all this time. Soooooo good. She's not calling any cops, that's for sure. Can't wait for what I hope will be more.
it may be good as idea, but there are too many grammar errors, plot nonsenses, one verb for another ... rewrite it in "english" ... or choose another language
Erm. Feel free to point them out...
What on Earth were you reading? 😂
...this was so fucking hot. Thank you very much--the overall quality of writing was *excellent.* I enjoyed the dynamic between Ben and Lily, and I hope we see more. Thank you for the story!!!!
Oh my god, SUPER hot. I love this, both the story AND the writing. I've never commented on this site in all the years I've been coming here, but I wanted to thank you and beg for a Chapter 2.
So glad you returned with this gem! Can’t wait to read (and favorite) more.
It’s Friday night, I have wine and my favorite writer is back! I may be biased because this story speaks to all the dark fantasies that lurk in the filthy alley that is my brain but it is one of the best things I’ve read on here. Well worth the wait.
This was the best story I've ever read on this website. I'm completely and utterly invested in this story. The characters felt so real. The dialogue was amazing and exactly like an actual conversation. You have so much talent! This was by all means INCREDIBLE.
This is superb. You write well except for a few grammatical errors and typos but your descriptions are wonderful. This is a very erotic story. Well done! I'll look forward to reading more.
Look. You don't have to show up to my Bdays, and I promise to be nice to your girlfriends that are the same age as me. All I ask is you finish this fucking story.
You still got it! Wish you would grace us with your writing more often.
Your writing permeates the senses with its forceful & deeply erotic timing and detail. I return to these stories you’ve posted, time and again, because few people write non-con with nuance like you do. What a shame that you don’t write more. I think you must be sadist! So fucking hot...
I really like this story. It reads like a non-con smutty version of 'The Town' and it's sort of fantastic. It would only be better if we could read more about Ben and Lily. He's a terrible person but not totally irredeemable. They seem physically and perhaps psychologically made for each other. Maybe she saves him somehow. And he rewards her by continuing to fuck her roughly as hard and often as possible (which she discovers she really, really likes).
Love this story. It never gets old. If you ever have the urge to continue Ben and Lily's story you'll definitely have happy readers.
Very hot.
This is my favorite story! I always come back to it. Please continue the story. It is so exhilarating when I need a pick me up.
Just read this story, many years after release. I hope you consider restarting, very engaging & well written.
You have to revisit and continue this story. Its bloody brilliant
The author could have been more descriptive regarding the accent in Boston. And should have stuck with one nickname for the protagonist. But otherwise well done.
My heart stilled multiple times. First when I saw that you've written something again. Again, so many times, while I read. Please, like many of us in the comments, I'd love to see more and read more from you. You have a brilliant way of crafting your descriptions and presenting the steaming hot brutality of some of your characters... ah, I'm in love, and I'll let my heart still a thousand more times for what you put out.
Part 2!! I would love for her to get threatened by some other townie and Ben come to her rescue 🥵🥵🥵 only HE can rough her up and use her body!!