All Comments on 'Taking Care of Aunt Sue'

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hornacekhornacekover 13 years ago
one paragraph?

When all of the sex in a story takes places in one paragraph that's not a very good sign. It's like you got to the sex part of the story and realized that you could only type in 2 more paragraphs in the editor. Very rushed and a rip-off.

And what's up with the last paragraph introducing Rolf? What does that have to do with anything? And it's a guy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
That reminds me -

ofwhen I was 16 and my uncle Ed had a major stroke and I used to go and help my Aunt Murial 52 with her chores ( not so much of a chore ) more of a young man's education !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Бедный парень. Совсем измучился за лето. Никакого отдыха.

OseekerOseeker7 months ago

Sorry ..

Not very good...

2 stars is being generous

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