All Comments on 'Taking Care of Mom'

More chapters and breeding

Another chapter needed of him fucking his mom's pussy.

Wrong category. What incest?

5 Stars. Mom and son must fuck!

This crap must have been written by someone who doesn't speak English as their first language. I found it very difficult to follow and some parts of sentences made no damn sense. Like the other commenter said, it's so far from believable as a person with only one leg in a cast could easily take care of themself for the most part. Get an editor please. Better yet stop writing.

Amazing, well written and loved it.

Interesting story, but you need an editor/proofreader to clean up the grammar a bit.

NOT WORTH MUCH...2 STARS!

Not going to say it was bad, but it could have been much better. The writing was hard to follow at times and there were some disconnects in the story. Kind of rushed feeling.

Totally lifeless and without a trace of passion.

***Thanks for the read.

Names and dialogue go a long way in getting the reader more involved with the story. Let the characters partially tell the story by what they say instead of just reciting the story as something that happened in the past

Kind of a mess