All Comments on 'Taking Ch. 01'

What a great life! Getting fine pussy from mom and sis. He needs to reward them with a baby bump!

Would love to read more. Thanks.

Exaggerating much?

<needs more ridiculous sound-effect notations> Only about 500 times, so clearly needs more. Comically bad writing.

Well done! Good flow and story!

Keep those creative juices flowing!

That was a good staty looking forward to more!

Responding to "Anonymous", you said "<needs more ridiculous sound-effect notations> Only about 500 times, so clearly needs more. Comically bad writing"

SHows us how to do it better, huh?

As Lous L'Amour said "I ain't seen none of your graveyards."