All Comments on 'Taking Down Tony'

I enjoyed this story great suspense in it. please keep writing

I really like your stories! You always find a way to turn some type of tragedy into triumph.

I look forward to your next one!

Thank you. Great story, well imagined, well executed and well written.

Don't stop.

You have amazing talent.

Good Story. Well written. Lots of adventure and action and some sex too.

Ready for your NEXT story!!!

Enjoyed the adventure. Need more like it. Keep up the good work.

AR-15? Are you former AF?

I am so glad to read a long story that can still keep my interest and not get boring,sexy serious yet flows well I hope to see much more from you in the future

you've posted. You are now my new favorite author. I have a couple other favorites but they haven't posted in years. A small note - you seem to really capture kids' and dogs' energy (no kids in this story, but your other ones). Must be the good writing. Thanks for sharing.

My first read of your work, but not my last! I enjoyed it a lot. I love the stories where the good guys win!

Thank you.

thanks for another enjoyable story, please keep them coming...

Another awesome story. Can't wait to read more.

Love all of your work. Hope to see more in the future.

I scanned the recent comments and .... what more can be said? I loved the story as just about everyone else has. You are an excellent author and I appreciate your sharing your talent with us. [Gualterio]

not one bad story in the lot i couldn't quit till i read them all keep up the good work

I reckon as how I'm going to have to put you on my favorites list. Your stories are just that good and this one, especially so!

M16 and Head makes you sound like a Jarhead. AR15 is Civilian version of M16 Jenny Bear. Police Officers carry them.

This was a great story. I like stories that have a damsel in destress. Great job on this one, I hope you can write many more like it. Keep up the great work. 5***** toby9790.

So well written and exciting from beginning to end!

when is the film coming out?

with all the trimmings, TK U MLJ LV NV

LOL - this was a far from ordinary as it might get - it required a couple of major "on faith" acceptances. The ex-marine and his buddies just happen to be the ones Jill knew, the ineptitude of the crooks - but hey it worked for me -

And it is all still Plausible - less likely but plausible - nice work.

Another very nice story. Nice sentiment and definitely a love story. For the first time in a very long time I have to agree with an Anonymous, When is the movie coming out?

This one could be interesting to hear it from Christie's or Jill's perspective. Make a nice followup story.

Thanks

WEB_SPINNER, I agree with the others; find a way to submit this for at least a cable movie consideration. This reads better and seems somewhat plausible (with a few adjustments) than half of what Lifetime TV. shows.

Anyway, enjoyed the story and that it worked out well for all in the end (Hope Tony 's end was long and painful). Good work, great read look forward to more from you soon.

after what just happened to castro in cleveland..................after kidnapping thos 3 young girls, raping, beating, impregnating two of them, and held them for 9-11 years....tking the one pregnant girl and starving her, then stomping on her stomach till she aborted, not once but twice! then letting the other child have her baby, and kept her for 4 years............................this man got what he deserved..........life sentences for the murders, and 10 years for each of the other more tham 970 charges, plos an additional 1,0000 years!!!!! hopefully the inmates and prison personnel will make up for what our justice system could not do! such as leaving his cell door unlocked, and the inmates calling him "miss ariel"!!!!! this story just came to mind as the trial ended! thanks!

wonderful

Excellent but not as good as Irish Eyes. That is why a 4.

Well written...well thought out...well presented!!!!!!

I find side-line romances in stories tedious and distracting from the main story. The story didn't really need the Bear-Jill romance. The fact that it happened was too predictable and did nothing to help the story progress. It came off as more trite and pointless than interesting or entertaining.

is always the same, vaya con dios and R I P. TK U MLJ LV NV

Don't you think, if nothing else, Christy warranted some of the money split due to the hardship that she endured? ****'s

WoodButcher57

loved it. but. seasick marine?lol

you had a short but spectacular burst of story writing, and then silence. here's wishing you would consider submitting more of your work.

???

In one month you set a record for some of the best writing ever seen here. And then you just quit....what happened?

Please consider writing again.

Good story,but does Stella and T.Willams know that Stanley now is married ? !!!

I liked it a lot but it felt wrong that the guy who died on guard duty didn't have his family compensated from the "spoils of war", and neither did Christy. Also the revenge seemed a little too hasty and played out too easily. I would have liked there t have been more struggle there, it would have felt better once he had succeeded. I think i would have enjoyed a scene between Bear and his sister where he pretended to be pissed at Bear and Bear, big as he is feels bad, until he realises he is having his leg pulled.

Where are you now??? Since 2010 when you stunned the Literotica readers with stories like Irish Eyes, Rising From The Ashes, Powerball and now this Taking Down Tony for a person who doesn't normally read too many Romance stories for me these are all ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Stories . So please tell

us all, why the fuck have you stop posting stories when you are such a talented and gifted writer. After 7 year will we ever hear from you again??????

Between you, me and the gate post were are you? I hope everything is OK with you? We all enjoy your stories! PLEEEEEEEEEZE WRITE MORE FANTASTIC STORIES!!!!!

Story is Fantastic! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

The correct word for a sleeping space is berth, not birth. Please get it right in the future. I have found over a hundred instances of two to as four words with the same pronunciation, but different spelling, and meaning. Please check for the correct usage.

To coin Dennis Hopper's words (My Science Project Movie) IT'S A FUNKY BALI HEIY

(HI) ★★★★★

You have given us readers so much joy from your stories and this one is no exception another 5 star story. But what the hell, as kookaburra stated its nearly eight years since your last post. Are we going to here from you again?????? Please, please write more stories for us to read.

These stories were written all in 1 year and back in 2010. Since then, nothing. I hope you didn't just "Stop" writing. If you are writing elsewhere, I, and I am sure others would love to know where those stories are.

Either way, thank you for the few stories you posted, they are exciting "REAL" stories and not just wild sex stories. They have great plots and intrigue. Good sex helps too, but even without the sex, your stories stand easily on their own.

An enjoyable tale. Mostly holds together.

I know it easy for lotto or trust fund or business owner. However ir is predictable. Characters are okay but quite a ways from fully developed. Try having the heroine save the hero back at some point. Show she has guts.

Your story was absolutely wonderful and kept me interested the entire time. I'm sure I speak for others as well whenever I say this, a sequel to this story would be amazing!

I love your stories I don't know why you quit writing something happened to you or what. I just know that I love every one of your stories and wish you would have written more if your dead rest and peace. I just really love every one of your stories.

Well that was one mighty fine story. Action, love and adventure, there isn't much more to ask for?

Where are other writers imagination? Us keyboard drivers need this and more. As a very famous country singer said "The mud, blood and beer" (Cash). That is what we thrive on. "Good be sweet pussy" (Yoda) and don't forget the 12 inch dicks.

But, a seasick marine? No way, lol.

Like your stories and this one is no exception. Good story line and romance. Well done

Bear!

Seasick? But they were both marines? Guess he wasn't much of a River Bear. Hehehe...

Still... Damn straight a great story.

just wow!

Lol. No way. Hehehehehe.

good story, I always love a little action with the bad guys getting theirs.

great story, a bit of editing help would make the few glitches less jarring

Damn Great

I have just finished reading all your stories and enjoyed them all very much (5*). I look forward to reading more as you post them. Thanks Steve

It is a bloody good story. Love it. AAAAAA+++++

I'm speechless, another 5 star and fav.

A five from me, I started it and couldn’t put it down. Damn good read, thank you for posting this.

Now THAT is how a story is supposed to be written!! Loved it!

Schoolboy stuff.A person the size of Bear is bound to be noticed and where does a dog shit on a boat and what did it eat ? As for all the shagging on the island,how come neither female got pregnant?.

A pretty darn good tale, Web Spinner. I had an Army buddy like Bear. He passed a couple of years ago. Good Bro's like him are few and far between. 5.

Stanley Kowalski was the character in Tennessee Williams' "A Streetcar Named Desire" played on stage and screen by Marlon Brando. His bravura, spontaneous acting fit the difficult material perfectly, though Jessica Tandy's brilliance as Blanche DuBois won her a Tony and most of the attention from critics. Ironically, Elia Kazan cast Vivien Leigh, not Tandy (a classically-trained British stage actress who had emigrated to America in search of better roles), as Blanche in the screen adaptation of Streetcar.

Not much sex but a good story.

Bill S.

I might not have mentioned Vinnie as the very end, but all of that, a paragraph or two earlier. The very end should leave a nicer "last bite taste." But a 5, if barely.

“Nitpic8 months ago

Schoolboy

Schoolboy stuff.A person the size of Bear is bound to be noticed”

Yeah, so? Lots of big guys around so that’s not a real handicap.

“where does a dog shit on a boat and what did it eat ?”

Dog food. A dog owner, when stocking for a trip, will make sure there is plenty. As for poopage, dogs can be trained.

“As for all the shagging on the island,how come neither female got pregnant?.”

Easy. Birth control.

Sorry, had to point out the fallacies to those questions. I enjoyed the story too.

Interesting story, but the way their plan went down, the cartel is going to get pissed off. Best they could hope for is to create suspicion and for Tony to get whacked by the cartel. Taking the money and some of their other actions put them at risk. However, fleeing the area and sailing was a smart idea. But only possible if rich and plugged in with friends to do the heavy lifting. Good story. Surprised Christy didn't need serious therapy.

Thank you!

I have read all your stories and have yet to be disappointed. Love your writing! KUDOS!

Where did the Christmas presents come from?.Who looked after Jakes house all the time he was away.?Who did Bears work on his dad's farm?.

Honestly fuck Jill thats my opinion

Poor writing

Lots of missing words like 'the' and 'my'

Proof reading very much needed

Nice story. Very well told. Thank you

Web_Spinner; Thanks for another classy story worth a "5".

Often the problem is not the author but the readers on Literotica. These stories are free.

Tom Clancy was a great author with professional editors. I still found mistakes, some egregious, including a major geographical error. The books were not cheap. I still loved his stories and finding an error was like playing a 'sleuth' game, adding to my enjoyment.

A commentator asked: "from?.Who looked after Jakes house all the time he was away.?Who"

Note the commentator's careful editing. ;)

1) The commentator wanted an 8 pager instead of a 5? (Why wasn't MC's mother's dress given a one paragraph description? :) )

2) Previously his security friend did it, so one might assume he would again.

Well you get the point! Support the authors, and for most criticisms, send them in a private message to the author instead of 'big noting" one's self.

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Top Shelf Story!

11/10!!!!!

Jake solved all of Christy's problems with 2 things - a gun, and his penis. Well, mostly his penis.

Excellent !