All Comments on 'Taking Employee at a Party'
by Sexybeast8899
- 102 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoBut in the future, I suggest you proof read your stories more closely. This had numerous obvious errors that a close proof reading should have caught. One example was:
"...watch the tap and he can decide for himself how far you we're going...". This should have been: "...watch the tape and he can decide for himself how far you were going...".
It's amazing how many people have trouble with contractions, such as "we're" or "you're". The easiest way to deal with this issue is to say the words to yourself, without using a contraction. The contraction "we're" is equivalent to the phrase "we are". In the example sentence, was the speaker saying "...he can decide for himself how far you we are going..."? No, that would make no sense. He was saying "...he can decide for himself how far you were going...".
Another example is, "Your going to make me cum.", which should have been "You're going to make me cum.". In this case, one would say "You are", so a contraction is called for.
The story is rife with punctuation errors and examples of poor style. I'll cite an example of a sentence that also included a typo:
Consider the sentence: "Answer him." I whispered to Anne noticing that he was yelling from to doorway around the corner and not wanting him to walk any closer.
This sentence Is poorly written, and contains the word "to" in place of "the". This sentence could be improved in a number of ways, but an example of a better sentence is:
"Answer him", I whispered. He was yelling from around the corner, and I didn't want him to come closer.
But keep writing. This could be the beginning of a longer story, in which the cheating slut wife outrageously cuckolds her husband. That could be entertaining, as long as the husband remained clueless. If he eventually did find out what was going on, he should become angry, and consequences should ensue. But please do not have the husband find out that his wife is cheating, and be turned on by it, or be too timid to do anything about it. There are far too many stories about wimpy "cream pie" eaters on this site already.
Anonymousover 5 years agoHe wants to bring his video and talk about a settlement and the rape charges, as well as the post-nup and divorce
Anonymousover 5 years agoSee you in Court dumbass. Anne called the police and headed down to the hospital to get a rape kit done. With a husband and child at home, what kind of special stupid man risks everything for a quick fuck with an employee? He goes to prison, the Company is ruined and everyone loses their jobs. All because he can't keep his pants buckled. Dumber than a stump.
1 star
Anonymousover 5 years agoA hot little wife who enjoys playing and a boss who wants her. Great combination. It's too bad those silly fools who posted earlier can't grasp the concept of fiction. Keep it up and let's see more.
oldbearswitchover 5 years agoBesides the fact there's nothing to like here, your sex writing is not very good for a stroke story, which is all you got.
I figure you are capable of better sex writing, but why waste your talents on that. Too many of those crap-screed stories here already.
What would be cool is resolve this so boss eats shit, hubby doesn't wimp or get ruined, wife has RAAC (Reconcile After Atonement Contrition) and some punishment sex from hubby. That would be much rarer, and harder to do.
Thanks for sharing and scoring and allowing comments!
katibover 5 years agoYour reading public has come up with numerous adverse comments of no particular value about your story. They missed its one great feature. I loved your story due to its great dialogue. Dialogue is the hardest part to write, and you did it well.
Anonymousover 5 years agoANNE is a KEEPER!!
The story is VERY EROTIC & REASONABLY REALISTIC.
Re anon 09/22/18 TOTAL BULLSHIT. Chances are it never happened, BUT similar scenarios happened to many people (including me). This story mirrors many true events.
My wife, me & our 2 y/o son went to a big-ass swimming pool party. After dark, while i was in the swimming pool watching my son, my wife was absent from the party for about 25 minutes. She was nowhere to be seen. For 20 minutes prior to that she spent in the company of a rich divorced guy who was a known womanizer. They were sitting together & walking thru the large property. Based on my wife's body language, it was obvious to me she was into him!
When she re-appeared i saw her & him by the bar. There she took a beer & broght it to me. She kissed me passionately & said, "I am sorry i didn't tell you i'd be leaving, (the rich guy) showed me the fully staged model home & explaned everything about the choice of materials & colors. He is the developer for the enclave... Just so you know, I got a job offer, to work for him... i gave him my cell number. He will contact me... Oh yeah, the 3 of us have an open invitation to visit him for Labor Day at his cottage... "
I was thinking to myself, "What the fuck is going on? Should I tell her I think it all is too fishy for my taste?"
She asked me, "What do you think? Are you happy for me?"
I was thinking to myself, "I am sure he wants to get into your pants..."
But i said, "I am happy for you, I will support you every step of the way!" (At the time I was not yet aware of my voyeur side, but it already had an impact on my decisions.)
Anonymousover 5 years agoI would love to be at a party and have a guy fuck me like that. My husband wont.
Anonymousover 5 years agoFun.. I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE BUT I WOULD LOVE TO FULFILL YOUR FANTASY....
Anonymousover 5 years ago:)
CyJmy69over 5 years agoAgain it needs to be proofed and edited. I also want to see it given more detail. I wasn't as crazy about how SexyBeast brought this story together as others. A quickie in the kitchen, blackmail? I would've liked to have had them participate in lots of foreplay here at the party and then meeting later for sex, long lengthy sex. I don't think blackmail was the way to go but ... Meant to give 3 stars not 4.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWhen my wife was in her mid 30s she was having an off-again on-again affair with her big boss. She admitted that to me after he was transferred to another part of the country.
MrBondsabout 5 years agoShort, hot and erotic. Your style is direct but still descriptive. Thanks!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoHer boss fucked her good. He is naturally quite brazen. It worked.
She is a good person. She is a keeper both as a wife & as an employee.
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Re anon "HI SEXYBEAST8899: THIS IS A FINE WIFE SEX STORY..."
He & I have something in common: each of us is turned on when his wife is hit on by other men.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoVERY VERY EROTIC.
Is it realistic too? Depends... The fact is the wife did not want to scream. The boss was groping in her own house whilst the guests were in the backyard. The boss was boldly playing for keeps.
Is Anne a keeper as a wife or as an employee or both? BOTH?
Why I think Anne is a keeper as a wife? Because (a) her husband does not know she has sex on the side when the opportunity presents itself, & (b) what he doesn't know won't hurt him!
Would i forgive my wife if her boss were fucking her. YES, I WOULD!
It is complicated when your wife has a sex with her boss. Was she overwhelmed by unexpected circumstances? Sometime a woman fees she is between a rock and a hard place.
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(*) Actually my wife's boss was fucking her when they traveled together. I was (& still am) observant & intuitive by nature. I found no smoking gun. But there were too many maybes. Too much "circumstantial evidence"... I started to put 2 and two together, & I kind of figured out what was going on.
My wife was better in bed then ever before. She had let go of inhibitions, & became way more self-confident, in bed. Her self esteem had improved.
In that period of my life I discovered my voyeur side. It was very confusing. Took me some time to admit to myself that I am a voyeur & that it turns me on when my wife fucks another man (other men). The fact she was fucking her boss was the icing on the cake for me!
Next year my wife's boss got transferred to another part of the country. Our sex life was better than ever before. Most men are bed communicators, & so am I. Luckily, my wife sensed that some questions need answers. One night she told me: "I have never been happier than now. I am glad you did not dump me last year. I would have been devastated had you stopped loving me... Thank you for giving me a second chance... I will make sure you never ever regret that..."
mattenwover 4 years agoHe is bankrupt! She or the husband call the police, report sexual harassment or rape, and he's broken! So what fool fucks his employees in their house? And what an idiot sees that his wife is half naked in the kitchen with her boss and believes the dress has slipped! Or are your protagonists all idiots? How can you write such nonsense?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoIt's very erotic & KINKY when a married woman is fucked by HER BOSS @ a party.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI sure would love to fuck my boss really hard right now. From what I know, he's huge. Almost the size of my dildo, and I'd love his cock to fill up my tight naughty pussy.
Story was hot, and I'm wet. Got to go to my monster sized dildo.
Anonymousover 3 years agois neither erotic nor entertaining.
It is, however, a criminal offense.
BeauReadyover 3 years ago... who liked this story is as much a criminal and asshole as the employer who raped/sexually harassed his employee. There simply aren't enough of you Weinstein types in jail (getting raped and murdered yourselves!!).
Legio_Patria_Nostraabout 3 years agoYeah, one word to HR, and Anne can retire a rich woman, as can her husband! These stories are stupid, because Executives are held to a higher standard due to their ability to control the lives of those under them in the organization. Shit like this happened in the 1950s and '60s, when the husband could simply beat the dog shit out of the cuckolding boss and spouse.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThat stuff was not common in the 50s and 60s. And "sexual harassment" is not a crime, it's a civil offense.
Anonymousabout 3 years ago❤💚❤💚❤ (5.0)!
I rely love this story!
It is very very erotic.
When a girl's blackmailed by her boss,
a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThis is an excellent boss-fucks-wife story, I gave you a 5.0 (*****)!
The story is very erotic. In my book it is kinky too.
The story has so far got 191 faves out of 184.1K views, which is 1.04 faves per 1K views, an A+ faves-to-views ratio!
Last but not least, Anne is a keeper. Period.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoThis is a FIVE STAR STORY!
The wife was blackmailed by the boss.
She had office sex and was caught on tape!
The boss could give the tape to HR, or her hubby, or both. But he chose to fuck Anne instead!
In my book this is a five star story
Anonymousover 2 years agoYou writers do realize that real people have taken their own lives because of acts such as then ones that 80% of the stories on this site flaunt.....
Anonymousover 2 years agoHow many anonymous cocks did this gay writer who call himself sexy beast have to suck to get the positive comments on this story?? Quite a lot …quite a lot!!
iameaselover 2 years agoThat was so bad that only those closeted men who dream of those big cocks could get turned on by it.
Anonymousover 2 years agoBravissimo! This is one of the best boss-fucks-wife stories on Literotica.
I rated it 5.5 = 110%
Anonymousover 2 years agoIn my book this is an A+ story. I gave it a
5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜)! I loved this story!
Anne is a keeper both as a wife and as an employee. Anne can make two men happy: her husband as 'full-time permanent,' and another man who at present happens to be her boss.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoLove it. Very very erotic.
Anne is not perfect. She has a wild side. She was not raped, she was blackmailed.
In spite of everything, Anne is a keeper both as a wife and as an employee. She is a keeper. Period. End of story.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI am copy pasting another user's comment.
"Anon - over 1 year ago
So hot
I sure would love to fuck my boss really hard right now. From what I know, he's huge. Almost the size of my dildo, and I'd love his cock to fill up my tight naughty pussy.
Story was hot, and I'm wet. Got to go to my monster sized dildo."
DeanofMeanabout 2 years agowould love to see the story from the cucks perspective and how he killed (metaphorically speaking ,,,probably) the blackmailing rapist or accepted it and turned the blackmail around or maybe burned them both to the ground or or or or
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI am copy pasting a comment (spoiler alert!)
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Anonymous, 12 months ago
This is a FIVE STAR STORY!
The wife was blackmailed by the boss.
She had office sex and was caught on tape!
The boss could give the tape to HR, or her hubby, or both. But he chose to fuck Anne instead!
In my book this is a five star story.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoTara my wife and I had a cookout. We invited friends and some coworkers from each of our jobs. Later when I discovered that I hadn't seen Tara for a little while I went to check on her. Her boss Henry Watson had her up against the wall at the end of our hallway. Our hallway had a 90 degree turn so they probably thought they wouldn't be seen. I stepped up to them and tapped Henry on the shoulder. He looked at me. I don't think that he recognized me and said F___ off I'm dealing with my secretary. I bloodied his nose and hit him where I thought would possibly be his kidney. I turned and walked away. I went back into the house after a short time to see what was going on. Tara was asleep in a chair with a coffee cup about empty. Henry was gone. I shook her she looked at me and said I'm sorry Ted I was drinking too much and Henry was taking advantage of me please I'm sorry. I said that we would talk later. She got up went to the restroom and returned to the party. We talked it over and agreed that she talked HR just to inform them of the situation that happened but give him a warning. Henry never crossed the line again. I had friends that were keeping an eye on them. Tara had a job offer and left her job there and accepted the new. Stand your ground men don't be a stupid cuckold.
Anonymousover 1 year agoIsn’t it funny when you read through the comments how many people that are reading porn stories suddenly develop a sense of self righteousness simply because a story doesn’t fit in with their particular kink? Fucking hypocrites.
Anonymousover 1 year ago★★★★★ (5)!
In spite of everything I know about her, Anne is a keeper in my book. Full stop. Period.
Anonymousover 1 year agoExcerpt from the story.
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"So if I told you I wasn't wearing a bra or panties right now, would that turn you on?" Anne asked.
"Very much so. So are you going to show me this bra you claim to be wearing." I replied.
Anne looked out the back window and then stepped closer to me. "Ready?" She asked.
"Yes..." I replied.
Anne took both hands up to the top of her dress. She grabbed the dress and slowly pulled the top down. As the top came down there wasn't a bra. I soon saw both nipples exposed and then her entire breasts.
"Ok, your right, no bra." Anne said smiling. "Do you like them?"
"Very nice." I replied as I looked at Anne's near perfect breasts.
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Kaeyoover 1 year agoWowee. Yet another predatory bossman screwing the office slut. Isn’t destroying marriages so much fun?
1*
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis is a 5 star story.
Anne is the Loving Wife of February 2023!
As I was reading the story, I imagined my wife was getting fucked by her her boss.
Anonymousover 1 year agoIf I was the husband of his despicable cheating horror of a wife, first I would do is run to get a DNA test on the keg, chances are it doesn't belong to him. I'll say they love their husbands do s*** like this, never correct my head around that idea.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI AM COPY PASTING THIS COMMENT:
"Anonymous, over 4 years ago
This is a very very well written story. LOVE IT! Gave it a 5 (⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐)! Very very erotic; reasonably realistic too. :)"
Anonymousabout 1 year agoNormally I do not like these type of stories. But in this case, the slut brought it on herself, by trying to fuck a guy at work. Normally, they both would have been fired, but boss came up with a different idea. Although if he pushes too hard, eventually it will “ leak out” ( pun intended) 5 stars.
Anonymous12 months agoWhy do people who dislike cheating wives or predatory men read stories on a porn site?
Yes it was too risky to be realistic and the husband is an idiot but so what. It's fictional porn.
The mentioning of her having 5 in heels on, while she played with the intern on the conference table was also funny. No one wears 5-in heels to work in an office.
We mortals can only dream of knowing beautiful women who are horny sluts, that can cum so quickly and easily, who are married to complete idiots, and work for us.
Anonymous9 months agoI was at a party and went to use the rest room. It was one with two doors, one from the hallway and another to a bedroom. I heard someone in the bedroom and being somewhat of a voyeur decided to take a peek. There was a beautiful blonde with nice boobs, wearing only her panties, down on her knees sucking a cock. The problem was, the girl was my wife and the guy was her boss. I was about to put an end to the blowjob by kicking the shit out of her boss when I realized a had a rock hard erection. I couldn't remember ever being that turned on so I watched as she sucked his cock until he came in her mouth. I went back to the party. Her boss took her back to the bedroom two more times to blow him. When we got home, I told her what I saw. She confessed that she had been sucking his cock for almost a year. She started every work day in his office down on her knees. He also sometimes had her blow him later in the day. He wanted to fuck her but she wouldn't let him. I said I would forgive her but there were two conditions. First she had to quit her job and secondly she had to tell me about every guy she had ever sucked off. Her boss was the only guy since we'd been married but she confessed to blowing two men when we were engaged, one of which was also fucking her. Besides me, she had sucked off 16 men, 8 of whom also fucked her. We had some great sex as she told me all about her sucking other men's cocks.
Anonymous9 months agoI am copy pasting a signed comment, which I can relate to.
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Helen1899 - over 1 year ago
Loved it, a great erotic story. I wish that I could find more like it 5*
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