All Comments on 'Taking the Plunge Ch. 03'

Very well written. Please keep this story going!

This is a great series. It works because the characters are becoming what they have needed to be, open, bisexual, and free from shame or hiding it. Great story idea.

Punctuating Dialogue

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If a paragraph doesn’t begin with a quotation mark, that indicates it’s narrative. When one character is speaking and is not uninterrupted by narrative or another character talking, every paragraph starts with a mark, but only the last one has a closing mark.

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Every paragraph of her story about her first time with Annie should have begun with a quotation mark.

Wow another gay male writing stories pretending to like pussy.

Try putting it in the right category Nancy.

I can't wait for chapter 4

This whole series is soooooo hot!

ONE STAR. This story was written for the sewer rats who roam this category. Pure garbage.

Wrong category.

Another great installment and a really hot bisexual twist. As a bisexual I wish my ex had been so understanding. Some people find desiring both sexes too hard to comprehend but don't take any notice of the negative comments - they're obviously not satisfying their partners or right hand, and haven't a clue what really great sex can be like. So don't succumb to their shaming and keep writing. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Perhaps, in future, avoid the shamers catagory

Who could.have guessed there were so many gays reading LW.

More please, I want to read about the bi orgy that these two will have.

Yea, right.

You started this in Gay Male because that's where it belongs.