All Comments on 'Tall Drink of Water'

As a fan of small breasted women I loved the girl, and the fact that she had a hairy pussy made her even hotter to me. Interesting back story too and a little subtle commentary on the porn business and the way we guys see women. 5*

Very nicely done. I like the characters and found it very erotic.

But something makes me think they are from the schultz family for fuck sake

Think after using the last name once , that would be sufficient for us to be able to figure out who everyone belongs too,,

Will leave you to it with a big healthy ACE

The story may have been hot. But I wouldn't know because I couldn't get past the mistakes.

"But something makes me think they are from the schultz family for fuck sake

Think after using the last name once , that would be sufficient for us to be able to figure out who everyone belongs too,,

Will leave you to it with a big healthy ACE"

Actually I repeated the name for the idiots like you that can't figure out much besides how to masturbate and troll. Oh no! You're voting *1 on all my stories? What writer here gives a fuck about the voting? Hey, if it keeps you off the street...

I just wanted to thank everyone who takes the time to write my stories, and I truly appreciate those that also make comments, positive or negative. Please be assured that I take any critical comments seriously, as long as they are somewhat constructive.

Malicious comments, or senseless blurbs about these stories being unreadable because they are riddled with grammar and spelling mistakes, are going to be ignored unless the person leaves their screen name because my stories, as imperfect as they may be, are far more coherent than your comments.

Interested in an actual dialogue or have something constructive to offer? Great. Give me a way to contact you. Otherwise you're just scribbling on a toilet wall and wasting your time.

Because there is a "reasonableness" here that appeals to me. Not everyone is perfect, and not everyone demands perfection.

Many small breasted women are insecure and easily seduced by older more mature men. More should be proud and realize that quite a few guy like tiny tits.

I have a passion for small breasted women and it is terrific to have such a good story. Thank you and keep writing.

I love women with petite breasts. Great story. Love to suck on those tits.

Pretty cute relationship between the two, and I love how the shy girl actually is shy :P

barn burner of a story, as we say out here in the sticks.

Omg, what a beautiful and well written story

First half was good but you took a wrong turn with the second. Porn sites and Mr. Arthur don’t fit the first half. Should have continued on your original.